Quote from: Latios212 on September 27, 2017, 01:28:12 PMThis is pretty good; I like the simplicity of the arrangement.
However, the melody gets lost at times, like in measure 2-3. Try keeping the countermelody below the melody; its jumping above obscures the intended sound.
Is there a reason for the staccato at the end?
1. Thanks!
2. Yes I know, but how can I do that? I'm thinking of lowering it by an octave between m1 b3 and m2 b 2.5, doubling the E, same with m4-5, but I don't know if it would sound well, and I can't test now because no computer access. What do you think about that?
3. There isn't any reason, I'll edit this