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Okay, I'll list the issues I see.

- Tempo is 140, should be 138 (yes, I used a tapper)

- First bass note in measures 1 and 2 should be dotted eighth note, not quarter note.

- Triads in bars 8, 16, 24 should be dyads

- No dynamic change or accents on the bridge

Things that aren't necessarily wrong, but I would do differently:

- Some off-beat eighth notes (e.g. fourth treble dyad) could be written as sixteenth notes.

- With three bars per line, the notes don't have a lot of space between them. Since this piece's rhythm is pretty complex, it could be a bit difficult to read.

- The key signature doesn't include the C-flat. Since the Mixolydian mode is fully consistent in this piece, I think it should be represented in the key signature.

Sure, they may be minor errors, but there are a lot of them.

What do you mean by "check them again"?

I think that sheets should always be ready to be replaced by better ones.

Dudeman, what was the problem with my submission type? I didn't consult Static's arrangement at all when making this one. Since the song has simple instrumentation, it's natural that the arrangements would end up pretty similar.

Thanks, ThatHiddenCharacter! I based this off of a MIDI ripped from the ROM, so this isn't really the work of my ear, but I do think I arranged it well.

Another issue with the original sheet is that many of the right-hand dyads are inverted. This isn't necessarily wrong, but since we naturally hear the melody in the top note of a chord, it sounds a bit off.

Supahstar Saga is short for HEHEHE I AM A SUPAHSTAR SAGA, yes

In Static's sheet, the tempo is a bit off, there's a wrong note or two, and the notes aren't very well spaced out. I think that those things alone should warrant a replacement.