Treat Land
Updated file seems good! I have nothing to change.
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Time for Dessert!
Updated files (ver03)
- Changed
- Fixed
- If this suggestion is same what Radiak488417 wrote here, then the rolled chord in RH had already included the notes.
- Added
- Changed
Quote from: Static on February 16, 2020, 02:00:30 PM- The Fn in m12 should be spelled as an E#.
- The beginning of the 8va lines should be moved a little to the left so it lines up with the center of the starting note.
- m15 beat 2.5 LH sounds like it should have an A# and B#, and it should be rolled.
- There should be a grace note F# before the G# in m16 RH.
- m17 beat 4.5 LH should be an En instead of D#.
- Changed
- Fixed
- If this suggestion is same what Radiak488417 wrote here, then the rolled chord in RH had already included the notes.
- Added
- Changed
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Olive Ocean
Updated files (ver03)
- Since that note is the first Ebb note in voice 1, Notepad automatically add the double flat back on the note. Instead of removing it, I make it invisible by editing the .xml file.
- The invisible notes correspond to the drum sounds that I want (35 Acoustic Bass Drum, 37 Side Stick). Changing the MIDI instrument to drum kit may do the job, but there may be better solutions.
- Tinkering and re-importing the .xml file resets the measure widths. Pasting measures also reset the distances between systems and potentially the number of systems in each page.
- Moving down those notes an octave is intentional, to let the top melody note stand out more.
- Adapted
Quote from: mastersuperfan on February 15, 2020, 02:58:44 PMJust a few formatting/playback fixes I made:
- Removed the redundant accidental on Ebb on m10 beat 3.
- Added invisible articulations to Layer 1 in m13-14 to get rid of wonky playback (now the invisible Layer 2 is the only one that plays), though I'm not sure if playback was already how you intended it beforehand. Not that playback is a big deal, but let me know if there's some specific way you want it to playback (e.g. one of us can use full Finale to add hidden percussion staves).
- Changed the invisible measure at the end from a quarter rest to a hundred twenty-eighth rest (or a semihemidemisemiquaver, as Libera would call it) so that it doesn't affect playback.
One question I had was about Layer 2 from m15-21. It sounds like you moved the notes on beats 2.75 and 3.25 of each measure down an octave compared to the original. Was this to avoid it overlapping with Layer 1? Just wanted to double-check since I think it would be okay (but by no means necessary—do it how you want) to bring those notes up even if the layers overlap.
Additionally, you might consider raising the RH in m12 and/or m22 since it feels like the melody is sort of "ascending" up to that part as it builds up. If you wanted, you could also double the Db's/Eb's by an octave in the RH in m12/22 for extra emphasis.
- Since that note is the first Ebb note in voice 1, Notepad automatically add the double flat back on the note. Instead of removing it, I make it invisible by editing the .xml file.
- The invisible notes correspond to the drum sounds that I want (35 Acoustic Bass Drum, 37 Side Stick). Changing the MIDI instrument to drum kit may do the job, but there may be better solutions.
- Tinkering and re-importing the .xml file resets the measure widths. Pasting measures also reset the distances between systems and potentially the number of systems in each page.
- Moving down those notes an octave is intentional, to let the top melody note stand out more.
- Adapted
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Meringue Clouds
Updated files (ver02)
- Accepting the changes and the suggestion.
- Notes added
Quote from: Latios212 on February 16, 2020, 10:12:20 AMGot that. Also fixed an articulation issue in m. 10.
Aside from that, only thing I can see if that m. 4 would be better written in two layers to clarify what's going on in beat 1. If you're good with that, then I approve! (Files updated in the Dropbox folder.)
- Accepting the changes and the suggestion.
Quote from: Static on February 16, 2020, 02:00:30 PM- In m2 RH beats 3-4 there's a really distinctive triplet figure here that I think would be a good addition. It's pretty prominent in the original track.
- Notes added
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