[MUL] Fortnite - "Dance Moves" by BrainyLucario

Started by Zeta, February 18, 2019, 11:00:54 AM

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Libera

Good to see you back.  This should be the last from me but the rhythm groups in bars 1-2 are incorrect; they should look this this:
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That being said, I think I'd change some of the note lengths in the left hand so that it instead looks like this:
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My reasoning is that then the incident rhythm between the right and left hand's in bar 1 looks the same (both a staccato quaver) and that then the first beat of bar 3 matches the first beats of bars 1 and 2.


Libera

Since you're busy, I took the liberty of updating the files for you with the above edits.  Approved.

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