[SW] Pokémon Sword & Pokémon Shield - "Battle! (Rival Bede)" by SH_AspKing

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Sword & Pokémon Shield
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Battle! (Rival Bede)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: SH_AspKing

[Kricketune54]

Hi AspKing, welcome to NinSheetMusic. I don't have a whole lot to say today as I don't have a piano in front of me, but wanted to drop some comments. Reason I state that is this looks like a very complicated sheet and I feel the need to test the feasibility of some of the chords. However, I am a Ghost Updater, so my replies to you are likely going to be a bit spaced out on the calendar. This is one of my favorite songs from Sword and Shield though, so I wanted to get things going for you at least.

Usually with submissions we look to have some sort of linked audio for reference - dropping YouTube link.

The singular composition credit goes to Go Ichinose, sourced from here.

Feedback

• This is a very dense sheet on the current number of pages and not easy to look at - I think you could play around with the measure systems a bit so page 2 is maybe 5 systems instead of 6, and then the same for page 3. Making this a four page sheet would make this a lot easier to read (5-5-5-2). Page 1 the space could also be adjusted, I'd move the measure systems up a bit higher, and then widen the space between them.
• There's some missing notebeaming as well, to me it looks like you might not be aware that an entire beat should always be beamed together: ex. an 8th note on the first part of the beat, followed by a 16th rest, followed by a 16th note should have a beam that goes over the 16th rest to connect the two notes.
• m22 LH beat 1.0 and 1.75,  m30-32 beat 1.0 and 1.75 and for beat 2 this comment applies to, but it would be helpful if you could go through your sheet just to check again
• This is a good guide on beaming https://www.musicnotes.com/blog/note-beaming-and-grouping-in-music-theory/?msockid=07d994907287647c12f8817a73636584

Each submission requires an approval from one updater, before it can be accepted by a second for inclusion in an update. Hope this all helps

[SH_AspKing]

Hi Krick, thank you so much for the constructive feedback! I see that I was careless with my beaming, I have fixed them and found other bars with the same errors. I spaced out the score so that each page had 5 systems (which is the best case scenario thankfully!) and made some readjustments to the syncopated accompaniment. Hope you enjoy my new and improved version