[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Future City" by LeviR.star

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Epic Yarn
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Future City
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star

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[LeviR.star]

If by any chance you're about to relay feedback from checking my draft in the "Kirby's Epic Yarn Arrangement Project", note that here (at Zeila's suggestion) the last 4 measures have been modified to give the RH an independent part from the LH.

[Latios212]

This is really good. Clean, accurate, and simple to play. Happy to see this one

Only a couple of comments:
- I think m. 24 would be better written as 4-tuplets instead of 8-tuplets so it's clearer when the notes fall on the beat.
- For m. 53, 55, 56 I would suggest making the first left hand octave a dotted quarter and/or tenuto since that's a different part there.

[LeviR.star]

Only a couple of comments:
- I think m. 24 would be better written as 4-tuplets instead of 8-tuplets so it's clearer when the notes fall on the beat.
- For m. 53, 55, 56 I would suggest making the first left hand octave a dotted quarter and/or tenuto since that's a different part there.

- that's a good idea, consider it done
- I didn't hear that before, but I hear it now. Fixed!

This is really good. Clean, accurate, and simple to play. Happy to see this one

Thank you! I'm really satisfied with how it turned out.

Oh yeah, and the files are fixed, and whatnot.

[Latios212]

You're welcome! Approved

[Libera]

Notes look good, arrangement looks good.  All around good.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot