[3DS] The Legend of Zelda: Tri Force Heroes - "Title Theme" by Cashwarrior1

[cashwarrior1]

Updated

[Latios212]

- I'd suggest writing the turn in m. 34 out explicitly as a 5-tuplet because it uses an E# instead of En for the note below it which isn't obvious as notated right now

This should be F#-G-F#-E#-F#. This should go without saying, but please check my comments against the original to make sure both that you understood correctly and that my comment was accurate in the first place

Other tiny things before we finish up:
- Fix the large gap between the grace note and En in m. 7 (make it look a bit more like m. 3)
- Slurs on the grace notes in m. 31, 40, 47?
- I think the staccatos in the second half of m. 31 might look better under the bottom noteheads, they're a bit awkwardly on the staff line right now.
- Extend the slur over the rest of the phrase you added in m. 43

Think I'm done with it after that~

[cashwarrior1]

This should be F#-G-F#-E#-F#. This should go without saying, but please check my comments against the original to make sure both that you understood correctly and that my comment was accurate in the first place

I did check the original, but to be honest, I didn't hear a difference from what I wrote and what the original was. Only now, with the correct notes, do I notice a difference.

Updated.

[Latios212]

Looks good, I'll accept

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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