[SWITCH] Xenoblade Chronicles 2 - "Where We Used to Be" by eashwar

[Latios212]

Sorry for the wait, this is on my to-do list for tomorrow

[Latios212]

Here we go! This looks like a lot, but it's all minor things, so please don't freak out - you did a really good job with this sheet

- Title shouldn't have "To" capitalized.
- Intro especially could really use a "rubato" marking.
- Quarter G in m. 5 LH should be an octave higher.
- m. 9 chord needs to be rolled.
- I don't think the top LH G in m. 11 strikes again - I think it should be tied over from the previous G.
- Chord should be tied from m. 16-17.
- Last note of m. 17 LH is E, not G.
- First note of m. 34 RH should have a C under it.
- m. 37 beat 2 is missing a C in the left hand line. (Suggestion: move the E to the right hand instead.)
- m. 41-43 have some missing harmonies in the right hand.
- I'd suggest tying over the left hand from 45-47, to let it ring so there isn't a sudden absence of sound below the melody.
- F# in m. 48 should be Gb (Gbmaj7 chord)
- Grace note (C) missing at the beginning of m. 50.
- Last chord in m. 57 missing a D.
- Chord in m. 59 LH should have a G.
- m. 60 LH is missing its beat 2 chord like the previous measures, and I think beat 3 plays a C instead of overlapping the RH G.
- m. 62-63 LH is slightly off too.
- I don't hear the low octave G's in m. 66 at all - just a D above middle C for the left hand.
- m. 70/74's run had a couple notes off.
- I think there's a C in the middle chord of m. 71 as well.
- Double barline would work well between 66-67 (similar to 36-37).
- Definitely needs a dynamic change at m. 67. And again at m. 75.
- Fermata in the left hand at the end, too.

I've edited your submission with the above changes, plus some miscellaneous poking and prodding of the layout that I didn't get to finish last time. Lemme know if there are any issues!

(Super pumped to play this now )

[eashwar]

Thank you so much latios I'm excited too. My professor (who I'm taking VGM piano classes from next year) says he has a performance lined up for his studio in January and says I could perform this there (:

[Latios212]

No problem! And that's really cool, let us know how that goes~

[Maelstrom]

One quick thing and then it's done:
You forgot to notate where the hands collide. Generally, you just put parentheses around the "less important" note so your hands don't collide. I'd recommend doing this in m39 b4.5 and m68 b4.

Fix that and I approve.

[Latios212]

Files updated with the above (and m. 63 as well).

This is good to go!

[Zeta]

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