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[ShyYoshiGuy]

Never underestimate the power of AudioStretch, heh.

[SW] - Yoshi's Crafted World
Main Theme - [MUS] [YouTube] [MP3]

Was already on site.

[GB] - Game & Watch Gallery
Manhole - [PDF] [MIDI] [MUS]

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[Brassman388]

Have some pride for what you do, man.



It looks fine but just a few things to consider.

First is tonal and metric stuff.

In measure 4, beat 3 and 4 in the bass line; the G continues onto beat 3, the it leaps down to the E on the & of 3, the continues upward chromatically to F, then F-sharp back up to the G in the next measure. Kinda like a micro version of the figure in the last measure.

The quarter notes in measure 1 and 3, beat 1 and 2, as well as measure 2, the quarter note on the & of 2, sounds like it should be staccato. The only note that should be held out for a full beat is the quarter note on beat 4 of measures 2 and 6.



Other than that, fix a couple of visual things here and there and you'll have yourself an arrangement.

[ShyYoshiGuy]

I’ll get to the tonal stuff later, but...

Other than that, fix a couple of visual things here and there and you'll have yourself an arrangement.

Such as?

[Brassman388]

Take a trip into this thread.

http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0

Learn it, practice it, live it.

Also, there's a template file so it shouldn't be too hard to muster a good-looking sheet.

[Trasdegi]

Tip of the day: if you change the 0 to 1 at the end of the dropbox link, you'll get a direct download link (instead to a link to the dropbox page)

Such as?

Title/copyright info are misaligned, tempo marking is wrong (it's a quarter note, not 2 8's). Anyways, as Brassman said, using the template file is way easier.

[ShyYoshiGuy]

Tip of the day: if you change the 0 to 1 at the end of the dropbox link, you'll get a direct download link (instead to a link to the dropbox page)

I’ll go do that, thanks.

tempo marking is wrong (it's a quarter note, not 2 8's).

Lol, I forgot about that. As far as I can tell, you can’t add the tempo in Nopepad.

Also, there's a template file so it shouldn't be too hard to muster a good-looking sheet.

Anyways, as Brassman said, using the template file is way easier.

Ok, I’ll do that.

[LeviR.star]

[GB?]

G&WG1 was only released to the GB
G&WG2 was released to the GB, and a year later to the GBC
G&WG3 was a GBC exclusive

^^ All of these saw re-releases on the 3DS Virtual Console. Hope this helps.

Also, if you want to chat over Discord about your sheet, I can help you fix it up.

[ShyYoshiGuy]

G&WG1 was only released to the GB
G&WG2 was released to the GB, and a year later to the GBC
G&WG3 was a GBC exclusive

^^ All of these saw re-releases on the 3DS Virtual Console. Hope this helps.

Ah. Ok, got it. I feel like I should know that. What would one list for G&WG2 then?

[LeviR.star]

What would one list for G&WG2 then?

Great question. I'd label it as [GB], because the GBC cart was a re-release, so we list it as GB (i.e. The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening)

[ShyYoshiGuy]

Great question. I'd label it as [GB], because the GBC cart was a re-release, so we list it as GB (i.e. The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening)

Ok. Thanks.

Edit: I've modified the OP to remove the "?".

[ShyYoshiGuy]

In measure 4, beat 3 and 4 in the bass line; the G continues onto beat 3, the it leaps down to the E on the & of 3, the continues upward chromatically to F, then F-sharp back up to the G in the next measure. Kinda like a micro version of the figure in the last measure.

The quarter notes in measure 1 and 3, beat 1 and 2, as well as measure 2, the quarter note on the & of 2, sounds like it should be staccato. The only note that should be held out for a full beat is the quarter note on beat 4 of measures 2 and 6.

All fixed. I'm surprised with how little stuff I had to change.

Other than that, fix a couple of visual things here and there and you'll have yourself an arrangement.

At this point, I'm going to have to copy the entire song over note by note to the new sheet, which isn't too bad considering the length of this song. I'll be sure to start with the template next time.



Edit: I didn't actually have to copy it note by note due to magic. The new version is now in the OP.

[LeviR.star]

At this point, I'm going to have to copy the entire song over note by note to the new sheet, which isn't too bad considering the length of this song. I'll be sure to start with the template next time.

Not necessarily; if you're using NopeNotepad, you can Copy/Paste the measures (right, guys?).

[ShyYoshiGuy]

Not necessarily; if you're using NopeNotepad, you can Copy/Paste the measures (right, guys?).

Just... in time. I just figured that out.

[Brassman388]

Very good.

Keep on with it, man.

[ShyYoshiGuy]

I feel like it was implied from the last reply, but is this ready for the submission process?