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[3DS] Fire Emblem Awakening - ""......"" by Libera

Started by Zeta, September 20, 2018, 07:59:49 PM

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One thing I would change: The G on beat 2 of m10 RH (the fifth 8th note), would probably work better as a dotted whole note in the 2nd layer.

Other than that, looks great!

Brassman388

I didn't know either, but I haven't found a case where that to be true either.

Best keep your standard practices and whatnot.

The only other nitpick thing is if the triplet-eights in measure 4 are connect like that then there should be a 6 above it and not a pair of 3's.

The decres. hairpin after the forte in the same measure should be closer maybe or the forte centered in between both hairpins. Both work, whichever you choose.

No other things, after of which I will give this a huuuge thumbs up.

Libera


Brassman388

We talked about stuffs and whatnot thru the discrod.

Once I see the final thing, I'll give it the good to go.

Zeta

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