[N64] F-Zero X - "All Need is 30 Deaths" by Yug Guy

[Libera]

Looks good.

[Latios212]

Looks pretty good, just a few small things:
- Flip the inner ties in the m. 13-14 chord
- I personally think you're use courtesy accidentals a bit much here like on the Gn's in the LH in m. 16-18 - there are no altered G's in the bass in this section and there's only a single G# in the RH in m. 17 - even here it'd probably be easily understood that the LH takes a half step down from Ab to Gn instead of staying the same Ab to G#. Up to you, though one thing I will point out that looks kinda funny is the lack of parallelism with the Gn in m. 4 and 8 (and m. 2 and 6).
- Rests in m. 19 are a notch too high.

[Yug_Guy]

- Flip the inner ties in the m. 13-14 chord
- Rests in m. 19 are a notch too high.

Fixed.

- I personally think you're use courtesy accidentals a bit much here like on the Gn's in the LH in m. 16-18 - there are no altered G's in the bass in this section and there's only a single G# in the RH in m. 17 - even here it'd probably be easily understood that the LH takes a half step down from Ab to Gn instead of staying the same Ab to G#. Up to you, though one thing I will point out that looks kinda funny is the lack of parallelism with the Gn in m. 4 and 8 (and m. 2 and 6).

Must've been a remnant from an earlier version or I'm just dumb. Either way, got rid of the courtesy accidentals.

[Latios212]

woop nice

the lack of parallelism with the Gn in m. 4 and 8 (and m. 2 and 6).

How about this, though? (Also the courtesy flats in 13 and 18 seem redundant since they come after a new system with a key signature, but up to you.)

[Yug_Guy]

woop nice
How about this, though?

Oops, didn't notice that before. Fixed.

woop nice
(Also the courtesy flats in 13 and 18 seem redundant since they come after a new system with a key signature, but up to you.)

I changed the courtesy flat in 13, since it was cluttering up things, but I left the one in m.18. Hopefully you're okay with that.

[Latios212]

Looks good to me!

[Zeta]

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