[NDS] Pokémon Platinum Version - "Battle Hall (Two Pianos)" by Radiak488417

[Latios212]

I think I was wrong about measure 12—it IS a triplet, my confusion was coming from the grace note, so disregard that whole thing I said about it.

Ah I forgot to comment on this before, sorry. Glad you agree!

It looks like Notepad messed up some of the formatting though... I'll go edit it again for you, no worries. Do you mind reminding me which parts you edited just so I can double check they're reflected in the new file?

[Radiak488417]

I fixed all instances of the 16th-8th-16th pattern, so that'd be measures 3 and 4 on beat 1.25, measures 5 and 6 on beat 2.25, measures 15/16 and measures 19/20 on beat 2.25, and measure 8/28 on beat 2.25 (although I seem to have missed the bass on m. 28).

I also have a question about the bass in measures 5/6 and measures 21/22—they seem to be the exact same rhythm, just notated differently. You mentioned the beaming between beats 1 and 2 being incorrect in 21/22, so I fixed that. However, measures 5 and 6 have the first two notes as staccato quarter notes. Which should I use, eighths or quarters?

[Latios212]

I fixed all instances of the 16th-8th-16th pattern, so that'd be measures 3 and 4 on beat 1.25, measures 5 and 6 on beat 2.25, measures 15/16 and measures 19/20 on beat 2.25, and measure 8/28 on beat 2.25 (although I seem to have missed the bass on m. 28).

Okay, I got those - measures 19-20 already seem fine though.

I also have a question about the bass in measures 5/6 and measures 21/22—they seem to be the exact same rhythm, just notated differently. You mentioned the beaming between beats 1 and 2 being incorrect in 21/22, so I fixed that. However, measures 5 and 6 have the first two notes as staccato quarter notes. Which should I use, eighths or quarters?

Ah yeah I think disconnected staccato eighth notes would be better here, thanks for catching that.

Also while looking at this again I tweaked a couple of other places for better readability/accuracy:
- Got rid of the 16th-8th-16th rhythms in m. 9 and similar
- Filled in the rests in the bass LH part of m. 13-20
- Disconnected eighth notes with eighth rest between them in m. 1-2

Let me know if I missed something! Thanks for putting up with all these small revisions as we clean this up haha.

[Radiak488417]

It looks great! The only other thing is this:

As for things you may have missed, I'm almost positive I hear a B#/C grace note in the melody's lower voice at measure 9, beat 2, and in the same spot in measure 37.

If you really just aren't hearing it then we could get someone else to weigh in, but again, I'm 99% sure it's there.

[Latios212]

Yes, you're right, sorry for missing that! I've updated the files.

[Libera]

Just made a slight change of Dns in the bass in bar 6 to D#s.  I'm guessing it was an editing error rather than a transcription error so I just thought I'd fix it up.  Other than that this looks great!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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