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Author Topic: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack  (Read 648 times)

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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #15 on: July 25, 2019, 12:55:42 AM »

Looking at Latios' version it does seem to be the correct one, although I think the top line on beat 2 in bar 10 mirrors the lower line (E -> D -> C) rather than A -> B -> C which is different to both of your versions.

Some other things I noticed (all bar numbers refer to Latios' version):
-Why not have the harmony part in the right hand in bars 19-26?
-You could also include the little scoops up to the top note in bar 43, 45, 47 and 49.
-The last bass note in bar 58 should be a D not an E.

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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #16 on: July 25, 2019, 09:26:45 PM »

Changed things that were suggested -

- In bars 19-26, I put in the harmony part but moved it up an octave, except where the two lines are an octave apart. I left the octaves.
- I added the scoops (grace notes) in 43, 45, and 47, but not in 49, where I hear no scoop.
- I changed the bass note in bar 58
(Edit: Forgot to change the notes in bar 10 - it's changed now in the .mus file)
« Last Edit: July 29, 2019, 02:13:52 AM by Jack »
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #17 on: August 01, 2019, 12:59:23 AM »

In bars 19-26, I think that the right hand is identical to the bit in 43-50, minus the scoops, rather than what you've written in (I agree with you that there isn't a scoop in 49 by the way.)

Also it looks like the system distribution and such got messed up but I can fix that afterwards if you like (when you've fixed the above.)

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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #18 on: August 01, 2019, 02:13:19 AM »

Fixed - I must have gotten a little mixed up there with19-26.
Thanks for help with the formatting - Finale Notepad just isn't up to snuff.
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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #19 on: August 02, 2019, 10:59:56 PM »

No worries, I've updated the submission files with the same spacing as before.  Approved!

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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #20 on: August 05, 2019, 11:19:34 PM »

Adjusted the spacing a bit further to match what it was like before, particularly regarding space around subsequent page headers.

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Re: [GBA] Banjo-Kazooie: Grunty's Revenge - "Breegull Beach" by Jack
« Reply #21 on: August 05, 2019, 11:19:46 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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