[NES] Shingen the Ruler - "Credits" by Jacopo Tore & Filippo Ritzu

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Shingen the Ruler
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Credits
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: Jacopo Tore & Filippo Ritzu

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[JacopoTore]

[Libera]

Ah, nice and simple: always good for me!

-In the last bar the F# sounds like an Fn to me and the last note sounds like a Cn rather than a Dn.
-http should be changed to https in the url.
-The game name could come a bit closer to the title and the 'Composition by' could come a little further down I think.
-Instead of a double dotted rest in bar 4 I'd use a minim rest followed by a crotchet rest followed by a quaver.  Like this:

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-If you're into courtesy accidentals the first note in the final bar might be a nice place for one.

I took the liberty of updating the files for you with the above changes (including the courtesy accidental) but if you have any problems with that do let me know.

Approved.

[JacopoTore]

Ah, nice and simple: always good for me!

-In the last bar the F# sounds like an Fn to me and the last note sounds like a Cn rather than a Dn.
-http should be changed to https in the url.
-The game name could come a bit closer to the title and the 'Composition by' could come a little further down I think.
-Instead of a double dotted rest in bar 4 I'd use a minim rest followed by a crotchet rest followed by a quaver.  Like this:

Spoiler

You cannot view this attachment..

[close]

-If you're into courtesy accidentals the first note in the final bar might be a nice place for one.

I took the liberty of updating the files for you with the above changes (including the courtesy accidental) but if you have any problems with that do let me know.

Approved.

Ok, I did it. Could you add the second arranger? Thanks

[JDMEK5]

The only significant thought I have is the necessity of any provided dynamic at all. To which I say "meh" indifferently. Looks like a simple, straightforward, and solid arrangement. I'll sign off on this as well.

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This submission has been accepted by JDMEK5.

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