[PC] Stardew Valley - "Piano Solo (Elliott's Theme)" by Code_Name_Geek

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Stardew Valley
Console: PC
Title: Piano Solo (Elliott's Theme)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Code_Name_Geek

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[Code_Name_Geek]

This one should be pretty straightforward. (I am aware that the title is spelled Elliot in the linked video, but in the game as well as the official soundtrack album it is spelled Elliott.)

[Latios212]

A handful of small things:
- Move the pedal markings a bit to the left so they're centered under the note.
- m. 1 beat 3 should have a B an octave below the one currently written.
- m. 8 half notes should be B-E not G#-B.
- F# octaves in m. 9 should have a D# between them.
- You may want to put roll markings (one to span both staves) in m. 5 beat 1, m. 9 beat 3, and m. 10. (If you do, be sure to add a bit of space at the beginning of m. 5/10)
- Fermata over the left hand part of the last measure as well.
- Watch the indentation of the second system.
- You have lots of room at the bottom of the page so you can move everything down a bit to give the composer/arranger info more room.

Other than that, looks great!

[Code_Name_Geek]

A handful of small things:
- Move the pedal markings a bit to the left so they're centered under the note.
- m. 1 beat 3 should have a B an octave below the one currently written.
- m. 8 half notes should be B-E not G#-B.
- F# octaves in m. 9 should have a D# between them.
- You may want to put roll markings (one to span both staves) in m. 5 beat 1, m. 9 beat 3, and m. 10. (If you do, be sure to add a bit of space at the beginning of m. 5/10)
- Fermata over the left hand part of the last measure as well.
- Watch the indentation of the second system.
- You have lots of room at the bottom of the page so you can move everything down a bit to give the composer/arranger info more room.

Other than that, looks great!

Fixed. Great suggestions, thanks!

(Let me know if the roll markings need adjusting since it's the first time I've done those manually.)

[Latios212]

Nice! All looks good to me ^^

[Libera]

I have checked this before and it looks like you've implemented all of my previous suggestions.  Nice!  I've just fixed the articulations (for v26) and shall now accept.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot