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[SNES] Shin Megami Tensei - "Mansion of Heresy" by Rwars

Started by Zeta, January 09, 2020, 07:38:38 AM

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Libera

Quote from: Libera on March 14, 2020, 01:29:33 PM-Bottom note in left hand bar 35 beat 3 should be an E?  Just an input mistake there I think.
-On beat 4 in bars 20 and 28 I hear the bass jump down an octave (so another A crotchet but an octave lower).
-The last crotchet in layer 2 of bar 52 is misaligned.

All of the above hasn't been addressed/fixed.  Also, I noticed that there are still some doubled accidentals needing to be fixed (bars 27, 44 and 54).

About the spacing of the systems, something like this is what I was imagining:

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Other edits look good!

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Latios212

Taking over for Rwars whose computer broke...

Fixed all the stuff in Libera's above post, plus a handful of pitch corrections and minor visual tweaks:
- Changed m. 3 beat 1.5 from E to D
- Changed m. 5 beat 1.5 from G to F
- Slightly changed horizontal positioning of layers in m. 9 to avoid overlap
- Moved the rit. in 12 sliiiightly to the right
- Changed m. 13/21 beat 3.5 from F to E
- Lowered m. 18/19/26/27 beat 3.5 by an octave
- Fixed misaligned half rest in m. 21
- Swapped layers of G and Bb in m. 34 beat 1
- Changed m. 34 beat 4 from G to F and beat 4 from F to E
- Flipped m. 39 beat 2 top layer
- Changed one note in m. 40 beat 1 from A to G

Signing off on this version I just uploaded!
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