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Re: Tobbeh99's Replacements
« Reply #15 on: August 30, 2020, 05:19:27 PM »

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- Some of the arpeggio markings seem a bit too close to the notes/accidentals.
- m5 beat 1: Ab should be a G# (Amaj9(b13)sus4 chord).
- m5 beat 3: Eb and Gb should be D# and F# (Emaj9(b13)sus4 chord).
- m14 beat 1: Eb should be D# (D#dim7/A chord).
- m14 beat 3: Ab should be G# (E7b9 chord).
- m18-19 RH: The middle notes should be spelled as sharps rather than flats (En, D#, Cx, D#, C#, Bn).
- Copyright info should be within the page margins.

I've made all the fixes for you, and am accepting.

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Re: Tobbeh99's Replacements
« Reply #16 on: August 31, 2020, 05:44:40 PM »

Are you sure about those chords. Those seem a bit too complex. I thought most of them was just dim-chords. Apart from m.4 and 14. beat 1, which I think I saw as a rootless D7b9 chord.

And 18-19 I spelled it that way to show the interval (minor 5th). I think it looks easier that way.
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Re: Tobbeh99's Replacements
« Reply #17 on: August 31, 2020, 06:04:55 PM »

Are you sure about those chords. Those seem a bit too complex. I thought most of them was just dim-chords. Apart from m.4 and 14. beat 1, which I think I saw as a rootless D7b9 chord.
On their own, they would be just diminshed chords, but the LH is part of the chord too. Using m5 beat 1 as an example, A-D-E-F-G# makes more sense than A-D-E-F-Ab. The Ab and A clash; it should be written as a major 7th.

For m5 beat 4, it's the same deal with E-F#-C-D#; Eb doesn't make sense in this context.

m14 is more simple; beat 1 is an A diminished chord but spelling it with sharps rather than flats makes the intervals easier to read imo; Eb to Bn is a very weird interval. D#dim7 is the same as Adim7, just spelled differently.

For m14 beat 3, I think E7b9 makes the most sense; this is the most simple chord here: E-G#-B-D-F.

And 18-19 I spelled it that way to show the interval (minor 5th). I think it looks easier that way.
I thought the augmented 4ths were easier to read, but looking at it again, I think m18 looks better as dim5ths and m19 looks better as augmented 4ths. A-C#-G is a very natural chord to play (just an A7), and then F-A-B makes more sense than F-A-Cb. I changed m18 back to how you had it before.

Hopefully the chord theory stuff makes sense but let me know if you have questions!

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Re: Tobbeh99's Replacements
« Reply #18 on: December 29, 2020, 09:56:49 PM »

Sorry for not giving an update here earlier! We're slowly making our way through these sheets. There's a separate tab on the main spreadsheet for the status of this batch since there's so many.

It's fine if you do some edits. Especially if they are just fixes and touch-ups. I'm a bit unsure if I'll be around, hopefully I will to answer your posts.
Additionally, see this doc for an up-to-date changelog on some adjustments we're making as we go through them: link
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