[NDS] Pokémon Diamond Version & Pokémon Pearl Version - "Sandgem Town (Day)" (Replacement) by braix

[mastersuperfan]

Looks really good! Last few minor comments...
- m5 RH beat 3, m8 RH beat 2, and m16 LH beat 2 have 16th-16th-16th rest-16th, whereas everywhere else you have the pattern as 16th-staccato 8th-16th. It'd be best to make them all consistent, whichever one that is. (You also use the first pattern in m22 but the second note is staccato so I suppose you intend for that one to be different?)
- The top of the first page is a bit scrunched, and there's some white space at the bottom. I'd recommend moving the systems down from the top of page 1 and also increasing the space between the systems on the first page.

RH rest positioning looks better, although there are a number of places I think minor adjustments would make it look cleaner:
- moving rests a little bit up in m2 (around so that the tops of the quarter and dotted eighth rest touch the third staff line)
- maybe beat 1 rest down in m5 (level with the 16th rest on beat 3)
- maybe m13 beat 1 rest one notch down
- m15 layer 1 eighth rests up one notch so the bottoms rest on top of the staff
- m21 layer 1 eighth rests so that the bottoms also rest on top of the staff
- m22 layer 1 16th note up one notch
- m23 layer 1 eighth note up one notch
- m23 layer 2 eighth rest down to center staff because it looks weird in the ledger lines
- m26 quarter rest up one or two notches so it's not colliding with layer 2

[mastersuperfan]

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