[SW] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Disco Devil" by ManOfDucks

[mastersuperfan]

I can't find these on my end. I have a staccato on layer 1 and layer 2 of the RH though, so that might be what's causing the issue?

Oh, I think I see what's going on... I think the staccato you have for Layer 1 (the cross-staffed note) is actually assigned to Layer 2. Visually, it doesn't make a difference (unless you open it in v26), but it does mean that the cross-staffed note isn't staccato on playback. Should be an easy fix if you delete that staccato and re-assign it to Layer 1, not Layer 2.

One more suggestion: In m7 and m11, maybe change the fortes to mf, and then jump to forte in m14? mp to f seems excessive in this context since it's not a massive buildup in the original, and I feel like there should also be a dynamic increase from m13 to m14.

[ManOfDucks]

Oh, I think I see what's going on... I think the staccato you have for Layer 1 (the cross-staffed note) is actually assigned to Layer 2. Visually, it doesn't make a difference (unless you open it in v26), but it does mean that the cross-staffed note isn't staccato on playback. Should be an easy fix if you delete that staccato and re-assign it to Layer 1, not Layer 2.

Ah, makes sense. Should be fixed now!

One more suggestion: In m7 and m11, maybe change the fortes to mf, and then jump to forte in m14? mp to f seems excessive in this context since it's not a massive buildup in the original, and I feel like there should also be a dynamic increase from m13 to m14.

Fair point, I've made the edit.

[mastersuperfan]

aaaaaa wait one more thing

m1 RH beat 3 should be flipped up

that is all

[ManOfDucks]

aaaaaa wait one more thing

m1 RH beat 3 should be flipped up

that is all

Done!

[mastersuperfan]

groovy

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