[SW] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Heartbeat Skipper" by mastersuperfan

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Submission Information:
Series: Paper Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Origami King
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Heartbeat Skipper
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan

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[mastersuperfan]

[cashwarrior1]

I can't hear this song without thinking of glitchx and lena raine dueting on it in line them up
 

[Latios212]

The copyright needs Intelligent Systems. Otherwise everything checks out for me so approved

[Static]

This reminds me of something, but I can't think of what... Something in another game perhaps...

• There's a little bass flourish at the end of m2/24 that might be cool to add, but it's fine to leave it for simplicity's sake.
• There's a lot of places where the bass should be tied to the next note instead of restriking (like m6-7 for example). I'm assuming you didn't do this to keep a consistent pulse, but I think this adds some needed variation to the simple LH part. At least personally I think it's a cool effect when the bass is doubling the RH rhythmically sometimes.
• m17 RH beat 4.5: I hear the G on top instead of B
• m18 RH beat 4.5: I'm hearing A-C#-F# here (the movement from the G in m17 to the F# in m18 is really noticeable to me at least).
• Bass at the end of m18 should be 16ths instead of 8ths.
• There is a D on beat 4 of m20 RH

[mastersuperfan]

The copyright needs Intelligent Systems. Otherwise everything checks out for me so approved

This reminds me of something, but I can't think of what... Something in another game perhaps...

• There's a little bass flourish at the end of m2/24 that might be cool to add, but it's fine to leave it for simplicity's sake.
• There's a lot of places where the bass should be tied to the next note instead of restriking (like m6-7 for example). I'm assuming you didn't do this to keep a consistent pulse, but I think this adds some needed variation to the simple LH part. At least personally I think it's a cool effect when the bass is doubling the RH rhythmically sometimes.
• m17 RH beat 4.5: I hear the G on top instead of B
• m18 RH beat 4.5: I'm hearing A-C#-F# here (the movement from the G in m17 to the F# in m18 is really noticeable to me at least).
• Bass at the end of m18 should be 16ths instead of 8ths.
• There is a D on beat 4 of m20 RH

All changes made, except in m17 I still hear the B on top. Also changed the dynamics in m17-22 (mp in m17, mf in m21).

[Static]

Looks good to me

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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