[PC] A Dance of Fire and Ice - "The Midnight Train" by mastersuperfan

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: A Dance of Fire and Ice
Console: PC
Title: The Midnight Train
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan

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[mastersuperfan]

Measure distribution is a bit wonky, wasn't exactly sure what to do with it.

I think this was a flash game online since 2014, but wasn't officially released on Steam until 2019? I decided to date the copyright info as 2019, also because I think only the first three worlds were in the original flash version of the game (this not being one of them). In 2019, the game was released on the iOS store a couple months after it was released on Steam, so I set the console to be [PC] for the original "release."

[Latios212]

Measure distribution is a bit wonky, wasn't exactly sure what to do with it.

Nothing comes to mind other than moving m. 29 up a system, I'd suggest that.

No concerns about the copyright/game data the way you presented it.

Just a couple things:
- This is pretty minor but maybe worth notating - I think the eighths on beat 3 of m. 5 and 19 are played straight
- The triplet dyads are really tough at that speed. I'd suggest taking out the lower notes for the second and third ones in each group (hitting a dyad on the first one and the following beat are easy enough to do)

[mastersuperfan]

Nothing comes to mind other than moving m. 29 up a system, I'd suggest that.

No concerns about the copyright/game data the way you presented it.

Just a couple things:
- This is pretty minor but maybe worth notating - I think the eighths on beat 3 of m. 5 and 19 are played straight
- The triplet dyads are really tough at that speed. I'd suggest taking out the lower notes for the second and third ones in each group (hitting a dyad on the first one and the following beat are easy enough to do)

All done!

[Latios212]

Awesome!

[Static]

Pretty cool little piece here, not much to say. Chords and rhythms are all accurate, but I have one little comment about the melody:

I hear an extra note in the flute part on beat 4.5 of several measures (also includes m9-12, 19, 20, and 23-25).

[mastersuperfan]

I hear an extra note in the flute part on beat 4.5 of several measures (also includes m9-12, 19, 20, and 23-25).

Good catch, except I think the flute note on the first dyad is C instead of E.

Files updated.

[Static]

Good catch, except I think the flute note on the first dyad is C instead of E.

Yeah, that sounds right. I shall accept now

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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