[NES] The 3-D Battles of WorldRunner - "Stage Theme" by Jacopo Tore & Andrea Licheri

[Radiak488417]

Looks like m6 RH beat 2 is still missing a staccato.

[Libera]

Looks like m6 RH beat 2 is still missing a staccato.

I've altered that in the file I posted and also added in a slur on beat 3 in that bar to match bar 4/8.  Thanks!

[JacopoTore]

This looks pretty clean, I just have a few suggestions.

-In bars 3-11 you have a lot of mixing of staccato and non-staccato notes and I think it would massively aid the readability if you added slurs onto the non-staccato notes.  Like this:

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-The 8va and tempo marking could be a little lower at the start.
-The slur in bar 2 is a little off from the target G on beat 3.  Try to make it reach the staccato dot in the usual position.
-The midi currently loops endlessly, so you should change the D.S. to only repeat twice.

I have fixed all of these in a file if you want to use it.  Feel free.

Thank you Libera!!! <3 <3 <3

[Libera]

I've altered that in the file I posted and also added in a slur on beat 3 in that bar to match bar 4/8.  Thanks!

Hmm, I could have sworn that I added that slur on beat 3 but it wasn't there in the dropbox file.  It definitely is now.

Thank you Libera!!! <3 <3 <3

Last change, in bar 6 beat 3 there should be a slur, not a staccato.  I thought I'd edited that as well but I must've not clicked save.  If you could alter that yourself (or use the same link I posted before) that would be great.

[JacopoTore]

 
Did it!

[Libera]

The pdf has only got the first page in it for some reason.  I'll just re-export that and fix it for you and then I'll accept.

[Zeta]

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