[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Outer Rings" by Latios212

[Latios212]

Oops got it I'll forego the staccato though, this piece is fast and I don't have any staccato eighth notes anywhere

[Radiak488417]

Ah yeah that makes sense, I missed some of the earlier discussion. All looks great to me 

[mastersuperfan]

Last few things:
- m15 RH beat 3 also doesn't sound staccato to me
- Maybe increase the space between the LH and RH staves in m21 since the LH beam gets close to the RH? Not a big deal though
- The incoming lower tie into m34 RH looks really squished
- I actually don't hear the C in the RH on m3 RH beat 4 (only 4.5), but it's fine to keep it

[Latios212]

All adjusted, except the last point! (I think it makes sense to keep those chords the same)

[mastersuperfan]

nice

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