[NES] DuckTales - "African Mines" by Nine Lives

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: DuckTales
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: African Mines
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nine Lives

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[Latios212]

Nice work! Just a few small things:
- Super small, but I think I'm getting closer to 128 BPM
- m. 4 beat 4 RH should be D instead of E
- m. 7 beat 4.25 RH should be Bn instead of Bb
- m. 9 beat 3 LH - might be good to have a courtesy natural since there's a Bb playing above it
- m. 10 beat 4 RH - would be better off as 8th + 16th rest to avoid a staccato dotted note
- m. 14 beat 3.5 RH - should be D# instead of D. Also beat 4 would be better as Bb instead of A# to match the LH
- m. 15/17 beat 2.5 LH - should be C# instead of C
- m. 15 beat 4 LH - should be A# instead of Bb (also beam this to the B at the end)

[NineLives]

Should be good! Tell me if I missed anything.

[Latios212]

Ah I forgot last thing - suggest lowering the top staff on page 2 away from the header.

That's all, looks good to me ^^

[Bloop]

Looks pretty solid! Just a few little things:
-m8: I think the G in the R.H. on beat 3.75 doesn't tie over into beat 4, that's just delay.
-m10: The R.H. 8th notes on beat 2 and 4 should have a staccato. Also, the C in the L.H. should be C#.

[NineLives]

Should be good now!

[Bloop]

It is!
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