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Started by Lij, April 21, 2023, 02:58:31 AM

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Lij

Here is where I'll list my few humble arrangements - I'm just starting off transcribing so far, so any feedback would be really great:

Animal Crossing New Horizons:

- Museum (Tent)
PDF:https://drive.google.com/file/d/10n7Xe_RRFVJXDKQOQt2N4OFMj78x7GRW/view?usp=sharing
MP3:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wGtRKJblwFjSaCqzmMXOn3hvC5l7rgNN/view?usp=sharing
"Words make you think a thought. Music makes you feel a feeling. A song makes you feel a thought." - E.Y. Harburg

Beginner Piano Teacher and Aspiring Composer, feel free to check out my YT: https://www.youtube.com/@JMJ_Music

XiaoMigros

This looks really good for only starting off! Here's some feedback:
  • When writing for piano, arpeggios don't need arrows on them if they have an upwards motion
  • It's rare to see 8va used in bass clef (8vb is fine), maybe use the treble clef instead?
  • You have 4 measures in the first system, 4 measures in the second, but only 2 in the last. To even things out a little, you could either 1) Append a horizontal frame with a width of around 40sp, or 2) redistribute the measures (for example: 3-4-3 from systems 1-3).

Lij

Quote from: XiaoMigros on April 21, 2023, 03:08:41 AMThis looks really good for only starting off! Here's some feedback:
  • When writing for piano, arpeggios don't need arrows on them if they have an upwards motion
  • It's rare to see 8va used in bass clef (8vb is fine), maybe use the treble clef instead?
  • You have 4 measures in the first system, 4 measures in the second, but only 2 in the last. To even things out a little, you could either 1) Append a horizontal frame with a width of around 40sp, or 2) redistribute the measures (for example: 3-4-3 from systems 1-3).

Wow, that was quick - thanks so much for the advice, I'll make sure to implement those things
"Words make you think a thought. Music makes you feel a feeling. A song makes you feel a thought." - E.Y. Harburg

Beginner Piano Teacher and Aspiring Composer, feel free to check out my YT: https://www.youtube.com/@JMJ_Music

Hearbeat

That's so good.  8) 8)

QuoteHere is where I'll list my few humble arrangements - I'm just starting off transcribing so far, so any feedback would be really great:

Animal Crossing New Horizons:

- Museum (Tent)
PDF:https://drive.google.com/file/d/10n7Xe_RRFVJXDKQOQt2N4OFMj78x7GRW/view?usp=sharing
MP3:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wGtRKJblwFjSaCqzmMXOn3hvC5l7rgNN/view?usp=sharingpapa's pizzeria

Lij

"Words make you think a thought. Music makes you feel a feeling. A song makes you feel a thought." - E.Y. Harburg

Beginner Piano Teacher and Aspiring Composer, feel free to check out my YT: https://www.youtube.com/@JMJ_Music

charliejone

Quote from: Lij on April 21, 2023, 02:58:31 AMHere is where I'll list my few humble arrangements - I'm just starting off transcribing so far, so any feedback would be really great:

Animal Crossing New Horizons:

- Museum (Tent)
PDF:https://drive.google.com/file/d/10n7Xe_RRFVJXDKQOQt2N4OFMj78x7GRW/view?usp=sharing
MP3:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wGtRKJblwFjSaCqzmMXOn3hvC5l7rgNN/view?usp=sharing fnf
Your arrangement of the "Museum (Tent)" theme from Animal Crossing New Horizons is beautifully done! The choice of instruments and the arrangement itself truly brings out the charm of the original piece. I appreciate it.

Lij

Quote from: charliejone on May 23, 2023, 09:44:24 PMYour arrangement of the "Museum (Tent)" theme from Animal Crossing New Horizons is beautifully done! The choice of instruments and the arrangement itself truly brings out the charm of the original piece. I appreciate it.

Thank you - glad you like it even though it's such a short and simple arrangement! :)
"Words make you think a thought. Music makes you feel a feeling. A song makes you feel a thought." - E.Y. Harburg

Beginner Piano Teacher and Aspiring Composer, feel free to check out my YT: https://www.youtube.com/@JMJ_Music

Lij

Quote from: teelatrmo on July 03, 2023, 06:47:13 PMI really like the way it is arranged it really appeals to me. It highlights the original product.

Thanks! Great to hear
"Words make you think a thought. Music makes you feel a feeling. A song makes you feel a thought." - E.Y. Harburg

Beginner Piano Teacher and Aspiring Composer, feel free to check out my YT: https://www.youtube.com/@JMJ_Music