[NES] Dragon Buster - "Catacomb" by Jacopo Tore & Federico Mariane

Started by Zeta, September 20, 2023, 10:06:56 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Dragon Buster
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Catacomb
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: Jacopo Tore & Federico Mariane


XiaoMigros

  • Like with your other submission, I think this is in C minor, and the tempo marking should match our new formatting guidelines
  • The opening dynamic should be moved down a little, to be centered between the staves. Also, I think mezzoforte would be better suited here, what do you think?
  • The RH notes in m10 and m12 sound like whole notes
  • The rests in m14 RH should be visible
  • The A# in m14 LH should be a Bb, like in your other submission :)


XiaoMigros

  • The RH note in m12 sounds like a whole note
  • The A# in m14 should be a Bb
The rest looks good!




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Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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