[MUL] Super Street Fighter IV - "Theme of Dee Jay -SSFIV Arrange-" by Fantastic Ike

Started by Zeta, January 07, 2024, 06:09:36 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Street Fighter
Game: Super Street Fighter IV
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Theme of Dee Jay -SSFIV Arrange-
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Fantastic Ike

Fantastic Ike

The more recent of the twin submissions. I think the more complex melody warrants its own spot onsite, plus it just grooves in a different way. Honestly, this was the one I was originally planning on submitting, but figured it'd be best to have the original as well.


Fantastic Ike

Sorry, I just realized this sheet has an issue of where it loops. Will fix shortly.

Fantastic Ike


Kricketune54


Fantastic Ike


Kricketune54

Ah okay that's more like it haha
• Some beaming missing here between first half of beat 8th notes and the "a" beat (.75) 16th notes- looks like a lot of page 1 and some on page 2-4 as well.

Also, when doing the "arrangement by" for an official arrangement, still bold/non-italic the credit. Like so for example: https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/5004
• m14 RH 1.5 is Gn.
• m14 and m22 4.75 is Gn as well
• m15 and m23 RH hearing beat 1.0-1.25: C Eb. Hearing a C grace note on 3.25
• m16 and m24 RH 1.75 is a C
• m17 and m21 2.75 doesn't sound tied/is a shorter length, 3.0 could be a 16th rest
• m22 1.5 is a G
• m31 and m39 last note should tie to m32/40 LH  first note

Fantastic Ike

QuoteAlso, when doing the "arrangement by" for an official arrangement, still bold/non-italic the credit. Like so for example: https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/5004

Oh okay. I was going off the style of our GoldenEye replacements, but that works too.

Quote• Some beaming missing here between first half of beat 8th notes and the "a" beat (.75) 16th notes- looks like a lot of page 1 and some on page 2-4 as well.

I thought this was a stylistic choice, much like the beaming on 3 eighth notes. No worries, went and updated that. Everything else should be good too.

Kricketune54

Apologies, this one did fall off for me earlier in the month and I never finished some feedback I was working on previously.

• The tempo is actually a fair bit faster at 140 bpm
• For the first two measures of the song, I'm hearing the following in the RH (attached screenshot of what I hear). m3 also sounds to be the same as m1 rhythmically. The same rhythms/notes are also at m41-43 RH
   • Overall I would note that anywhere there's an Eb and Gn or a Fn and Dn in the RH, there is likely a Cn and Bn below each respectively.
• m12,m16 m20 and m24 LH 1.75 sounds like Dn, and 2.5 is Fn
• m34,35,37,38 LH beat 4 I hear these as two 8th notes. m35 and m38 the notes should be Gn and F# as opposed to An and Gn.
• m41 LH 3.75 this Dn should be down an octave
• m25 LH 4.5 and m26-32 beat 2, you could add an octave above each of these current pitches (hearing as such)

Fantastic Ike

Know we still have one or two things to clear up as per Discord conversations, but everything else should be fixed here. Updated

Kricketune54

#10
• Did a bit of a relisten - you were correct with m1 LH to have the C where you did, and the Cn should not be in the RH on 1.0, so as you have it in m3 currently is correct.  m3, m41, and m43 the LH should be as m1 is. The RH m41-43 should also mirror that first part of the song as well (for m1-3 vs. m41-43)
• Additionally, refer to my screenshot for m2 RH for the notes.
• m4 RH beat 1.0 G should be down an octave (same beat 1.0 as m2)
• m5-7 RH should mirror m1-3 RH, but beat 4.0 should be a dotted 8th note length, and 4.75 is a Gn.
• m8 RH 3.0 hearing same notes as 4.0
• m14 and m22 RH 2.0 this is a rest
• m32 RH  hearing 1.25 as An as well, 2.25 Bn, 2.5 is Eb (keep 2.5 Eb)
• m32 LH 4.25 should be 8th note length, and current 4.5 should be on 4.75 as a 16th. As for the RH, not hearing the Bn there, maybe you could have the Eb be dotted 8th length? Or instead of the grace notes in m33, you could move them to m32.
• m40 RH same note changes as m32, but I think the G is on 2.5 not 2.75. So it is a an 8th note.
• m44 RH 1.0 not hearing the G above here (think it's just Eb-C)

Let me know if you have any questions!

Fantastic Ike


Kricketune54

Nearly there:

• m1 m7 m41 m43 relistening, hearing an F on 3.75 just like m2
• m18 RH 2.0 hearing a Cn. 4.75 is a Dn
• m22 RH I think you forgot to make 2.0 a rest
• m31 LH the octaves could also be added.
• m34 to 38 RH relistening I think you could utilize two octaves a little more than currently (like m34 1.0). For m34 for example with exception of beats 4.25-4.75 you could add a lower octave, and do the same for m37 (also adding an octaves to all of beat 1). Then in m35/38 could add octaves to 1.75, or just 2.25 and 2.75. m36 could also add octave to beat 4.0
• m40 RH 2.0 hearing Bn, 2.25 hearing Eb. Sorry to kind of switch around on what I'm hearing there.
• m42 rH listening closer beat 2.25 there is no note here (slight rhythm difference from earlier).

Fantastic Ike

Quote• m18 RH 2.0 hearing a Cn. 4.75 is a Dn
• m22 RH I think you forgot to make 2.0 a rest

Think I accidentally switched these two measures up

Quote• m31 LH the octaves could also be added.

Added to m39 as well.

Quote• m34 to 38 RH relistening I think you could utilize two octaves a little more than currently (like m34 1.0). For m34 for example with exception of beats 4.25-4.75 you could add a lower octave, and do the same for m37 (also adding an octaves to all of beat 1). Then in m35/38 could add octaves to 1.75, or just 2.25 and 2.75. m36 could also add octave to beat 4.0

Think I found something I liked with this

Think that's everything. Updated

Kricketune54

Quote from: Fantastic Ike on February 29, 2024, 12:29:57 PMThink I found something I liked with this

Still thinking there are some spots you could still add octaves. Did you not like adding some of those places I pointed out?

One last other thing: relistened to m8 RH 4.25-4.75. hearing 4.25 as a Cn (same octave as current 4.5), 4.5 as a Gn (octave lower than m9 1.0), and 4.75 for m8 as a Cn (same octave as 4.25).