[PS1] Klonoa: Door to Phantomile - "And I Begin To Wonder" by Th3Gavst3r

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Klonoa: Door to Phantomile
Console: PlayStation
Title: And I Begin To Wonder
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r

[Th3Gavst3r]

[Latios212]

Yay you're submitting again

This looks good, just a couple of comments:
- Indicate pedal usage?
- It sounds like the left hand could play on beat 2 in the second to last measure like the others (beat 3 sounds emptier by comparison). Some of the harmony may already be covered by the RH chord, but I at least hear a middle C.

[Th3Gavst3r]

BRING ON NEW SHEETS

Threw in a con pedale, and I think that's a FM9 chord, so I added G-A-C to measure 7 beat 2

[Latios212]

Sounds right to me! I give this the old stamp o' approval

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[XiaoMigros]

• Maybe writing this over 2 systems would be better, to fill the page?
• The last chord in the RH could use a fermata too

[Th3Gavst3r]

Writing over two systems makes the notes really sparse, so I think it's more readable with the notes condensed together. As for the fermata, I figured the intention was clear with just one, but I guess the convention is to use both staves so it doesn't hurt.

[XiaoMigros]

Fair point about readability! I have nothing else to add so I'll accept~

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