Latios212's Aquatic Update Project Sheets

[Latios212]

Persona 5 - Rivers in the Desert

Pretty long, but there's quite a bit of repeated material in the form and the chords are pretty straightforward!

Kirby's Epic Yarn - Splash Beach

Don't want to stress the updaters out too much, so here's a quick and easy second one I actually arranged this back in 2016 and never submitted it... it needed some cleanup

[Bloop]

Rivers in the Desert
i couldn't help vibing on the D.S. chorus hahaha
-m1-4: After one repeat (and also continuing in m5-8), there seems to be an added fifth to the guitar chords.
-m73: Do you think there's a way to add some ties into the R.H. note here, since it's tied over from m56? There's some shenanigans you could do with an extra measure that's excluded from the measure numbering that has a chord with invisible noteheads that ties into this measure, but maybe there's an easier solution lol.
-m83 and 87: Maybe it's easier for the R.H. to take the upper note in these measures? They're pretty stretchy for the L.H.
-m117: The R.H. doesn't go up in the original, it stays on the G instead.
-I don't remember if or how this song repeats in-game, is that something you feel like figuring out and including in the arrangement?

[Latios212]

asdflksdfjg sorry for taking so long to get back to you on this one. it has been a busy late summer/early fall

-m1-4: After one repeat (and also continuing in m5-8), there seems to be an added fifth to the guitar chords.

Wow that is quite subtle. I like it, adding it helps with the buildup of intensity in the intro! Removed the repeat on the first four bars and added the fifths in the right hand. Note from here on the measure numbers of the feedback are going to be offset by 4 because of this insertion.

-m73: Do you think there's a way to add some ties into the R.H. note here, since it's tied over from m56? There's some shenanigans you could do with an extra measure that's excluded from the measure numbering that has a chord with invisible noteheads that ties into this measure, but maybe there's an easier solution lol.

Oh yeah, I forgot to do something about that. This might not be the best solution but I added a grace note chord at the beginning of the measure, and changed the notehead and stem symbols to things that appear blank to me, then pushed it left a bit. Let me know if this looks okay on your end! I also added a dash manually here through Text > Insert Hard Hyphen and pushed it left to match the other similar places (current m. 61).

-m83 and 87: Maybe it's easier for the R.H. to take the upper note in these measures? They're pretty stretchy for the L.H.

I wanted to keep the melody 1-1 with the lyrics here and figured it was easily enough implied to have the RH take the top notes of those chords, but I realize I've put more notes under the melody in the RH in other sections anyway. Poked those few up! (Didn't bother tying them over into the next measures)

-m117: The R.H. doesn't go up in the original, it stays on the G instead.

If that's the only c/p error I've made in this long sheet, I'd call that an overall win! Haha, thanks for catching it.

-I don't remember if or how this song repeats in-game, is that something you feel like figuring out and including in the arrangement?

Let me explore that a little bit and get back to you about that later; I don't remember myself. Everything else above has been updated though! Thanks again!

[Bloop]

Oh yeah, I forgot to do something about that. This might not be the best solution but I added a grace note chord at the beginning of the measure, and changed the notehead and stem symbols to things that appear blank to me, then pushed it left a bit. Let me know if this looks okay on your end! I also added a dash manually here through Text > Insert Hard Hyphen and pushed it left to match the other similar places (current m. 61).

This all looks good to me yeah!

Let me explore that a little bit and get back to you about that later; I don't remember myself. Everything else above has been updated though! Thanks again!

That's alright! I'll approve for now then ^^

[Radiak488417]

Splash Beach
Soothing indeed, thanks for reminding me of this piece.

-m6/m8 LH: I think I hear a C on beat 1 here like in m14, but it's probably fine to leave out.
-m14 LH: This measure's a bit weird but I definitely hear another F on beat 3.5.
-m17 RH: There's an F on top on beat 2, and I don't hear the A on beat 3.

[Latios212]

Thanks for checking!

-m6/m8 LH: I think I hear a C on beat 1 here like in m14, but it's probably fine to leave out.

Yeah, I think I'll leave these out since the C is struck on beat 1.5 anyway

-m14 LH: This measure's a bit weird but I definitely hear another F on beat 3.5.

Sure, I can add that in

-m17 RH: There's an F on top on beat 2, and I don't hear the A on beat 3.

Not really a fan of the inconsistency in the number of tones in the harmony here, but that is indeed what the original does, so no complaints

Filed updated, thanks again!

[Radiak488417]

Awesome, approved.