Shadowkirby_64's arrangements (NEW 1/24 Layton/Mario/Mother3)

[Taser9090]

In my opinion, I think Wigglytuff's Guild could have had more chords in the bass clef. The bass notes were held longer, if I remember correctly.

[Shadoninja]

yeah there's a lot more in there that could be added.

[EFitTrainr]

i edited it so that the bass sounds fuller. what do you guys think? (new version in the front post)

[SlowPokemon]

It's actually not bad. The trills are a bit much but they add some "flair" to the whole thing. Good for a second arrangement.

[EFitTrainr]

Sigh... any requests?

[Korados]

Sigh... any requests?

I'd really love to see more Pokemon Mystery Dungeon 1 and 2 arrangements, for me these games music (and the games themselves) are opera magni in video game history!

[EFitTrainr]

I'll see what i can do!

[fingerz]

Nobody do Spinda's Café! I'm doing that for SlowPokemon.

[EFitTrainr]

Sounds good. I was actually working on Treasure Town.

[EFitTrainr]

Mother 3 title theme.
http://www.mediafire.com/?tg2c22baggnpu0a

[EFitTrainr]

Any critisisms?

[Jub3r7]

lol, I will give a critisism when I get home.

whatever that is.

[Clanker37]

Hey, are you still doing Treasure Town?

[EFitTrainr]

Umm no, sorry. Im working on some stuff for slow.

[Shadoninja]

Mother 3 title theme.

let's get the obvious out of the way. needs to be formatted correctly.

you need to add a key signature. It looks to me like the key is D Major (2 sharps) or A Major (3 sharps). you also need a metronome marking and copyright information.

Measure 1 - the first E in the left hand sounds odd. are you sure that's the right note?

Measure 6 - no dotted rests in simple meters.

Measure 9 - the first chord would be extremely difficult to play because of the interval between the low A and high D. I'd move the A up an octave.

I think the piece needs a bit more oomph. try adding dynamics and articulations and stuff. for example, I would accent that timpani-esque part in the bass.