would anybody help in fixing up a sheet music missing notes sheets in post

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i few weeks ago i ask and paid my music teacher to figure out the music notes of the sims 2 sim heaven  but when i play it
it doesn't feel right here is the pdf and mus file

http://www.mediafire.com/?p5h27cnhlkxlypj pdf file

http://www.mediafire.com/?dy3sff77qn3t9c5 mus finale

music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HcHAwGLC2Ck

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The problem with the arrangement is that it completely leaves out several musical parts from the original. Perhaps you could write in the pizzicato strings as a second layer under the right hand.

[Olimar12345]

I hope you didn't pay too much for this-Seeing it's quality it isn't worth much...

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SORRY FOR THE LONG RESPONSE my internet sucks sometimes

anyway sadly am a rookie musician and was hoping seeing your skills is way better than mine i was hoping if any of you guys could give it a try and see if anybody could improve it