AweYea's Arrangements (feat. a hella lot of sheets)

[Maelstrom]

For audio stretch, I did use it but I'm a bit too impatient, so I rushed it.

This is the worst thing to do. Please, take your time and double check the entire piece when you finish it. It will save NSM a lot of work and you will have a much better reputation.

[AwesomeYears]

Updated Ending Theme, any more critiquing?

[AwesomeYears]

Going to upload the solo version on Scorch 'n Torch tomorrow... (Also, plz vote!)

[Brassman388]

Updated Ending Theme, any more critiquing?

Yes, but, uh, is it complete?

[AwesomeYears]

Pretty much, I even submitted it!

[Brassman388]

Alright, I'll take a look at it later.

[AwesomeYears]

Scorch 'n Torch [Solo] added for easier judging.

[AwesomeYears]

New arrangement added: King Dedede (Kirby's Dreamland)

Any opinions on the lower right hand part?

[AwesomeYears]

K.K Jongara is new everyone!

[AwesomeYears]

WHISPY WOODS IS NOW RELEASED TO PUBLIC

[Sebastian]

When I have some time later I get some feedback for you

[Latios212]

This is great! I love these Kirby tracks!

[AwesomeYears]

A new one already? Wow wee! This time, it's from an obscure game, our dear old Neopets! (Nebbles might like this) I did this after a couple of requests on the subreddit /r/neopets!

[AwesomeYears]

North/South Pawville is up.

[JesterMusician]

It's pretty good! (The PDF only has one page...?)

-All of your volta systems only save two measures - in this case, I think it'd be better to write them out, since voltas break page-reading continuity, and it's not worth doing so to save a few measures.
-If you do that, you can move the To Coda marking further down.
-Key changes that coincide with a new section of the piece (and it sounds like they all do) should be preceded by double barlines.
-I'm not an experienced pianist, but some of those intervals look impossible (Measure 10, for example). If notes are to be played with the left hand (Measure 38) you should indicate that with double stems and a l.h. indication (the C's in the RH staff should have their own stems, pointing down)
-Never use an 8va alta where you can use a clef change, as in 40 (I'd put it at 37, and go back to bass clef at 45)
-Be careful where you hide your rests. Generally, it's a good idea to keep rests that fill in the beats where the notes don't. Also, when you hide a rest, the notes in that beat should revert to standard stemming (38). Or omit them if they're not contextually meaningful.
-Instead of using a series of tenutos, consider using slurs instead.