[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Glitzville" (Replacement) by mariolegofan

Started by Zeta, January 27, 2015, 06:53:48 AM

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The Deku Trombonist

#15
January 30, 2015, 01:19:23 AM
The URL needs to follow the guidelines.

I didn't say that the bit near the end had to have no extras, just that the octave doubling wasn't the way to go. I'm sure you can incorporate the chords in there somewhere.

You can flip the stems on the first two beats of 32. And you missed the grace note just before beat one of 33.

The LH chords from bar 33 to bar 40 all need a C natural.

Somewhere around bar 55, there is a bar missing from the sheet that's in the original.

Sebastian

#16
January 30, 2015, 12:02:20 PM
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on January 30, 2015, 01:19:23 AMThe URL needs to follow the guidelines.

You can flip the stems on the first two beats of 32. And you missed the grace note just before beat one of 33.

The LH chords from bar 33 to bar 40 all need a C natural.

Somewhere around bar 55, there is a bar missing from the sheet that's in the original.
All fixed
Except this:
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on January 30, 2015, 01:19:23 AMI didn't say that the bit near the end had to have no extras, just that the octave doubling wasn't the way to go. I'm sure you can incorporate the chords in there somewhere.
I originally put the octaves in for fun. Frankly, I dont know what else to put there. I dont hear any other voices.....


The Deku Trombonist

#17
January 30, 2015, 02:01:43 PM
There are chords on beat 2 and 4 if I remember correctly.

Sebastian

#18
January 30, 2015, 02:20:09 PM
So I have to incorporate them? I really dont think they're needed.....


Sebastian

#19
January 30, 2015, 02:37:59 PM
Nvm

Quote from: Deku Trombonist on January 30, 2015, 02:01:43 PMThere are chords on beat 2 and 4 if I remember correctly.
Fixed.


Sebastian

#20
January 31, 2015, 07:48:34 AM
Got everything fixed, Deku.
Accepted? :)


Sebastian

#21
February 03, 2015, 04:22:29 PM
Just bumping before it hits the second page.
CAN I GET THIS ONE ACCEPTED? EVERYTHING IS FIXED! :)


Sebastian

#22
February 04, 2015, 08:55:29 PM
Quote from: mariolegofan on February 03, 2015, 04:22:29 PMJust bumping before it hits the second page.
CAN I GET THIS ONE ACCEPTED? EVERYTHING IS FIXED! :)


The Deku Trombonist

#23
February 05, 2015, 03:43:05 AM
Not quite what I had in mind. The polyphony is still the most important thing going on through that section. I'll have a fiddle with it.

Sebastian

#24
February 05, 2015, 06:46:09 AM
Quote from: Deku Trombonist on February 05, 2015, 03:43:05 AMNot quite what I had in mind. The polyphony is still the most important thing going on through that section. I'll have a fiddle with it.
ok.....


Sebastian

#26
February 06, 2015, 10:31:09 PM
Ok!
Accepted  :)


Zeta

#27
February 06, 2015, 10:34:11 PM
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