[WiiU] Yooka-Laylee - "Jungle World (Beta)" by Evanpianomaster

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Yooka-Laylee
Console: Wii U
Title: Jungle World (Beta)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Evanpianomaster

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[Tobbeh99]

The first and the third page seems to be missing in the pdf file, also in the site URL the "s" should be a capital S.
I'm pretty sure the tempo should be "Moderato e piacevole" instead of "moderato ed piacevole" because Piacevole starts on a consonant. 

[Maelstrom]

Wait, we can submit musx files now?

[Sebastian]

First, since this game isn't out yet and the song could change at anytime, you could put "Jungle World (Beta)."

I'll edit more feedback in when my computer turns on :p

[Bespinben]

I love you.

(Critique coming soon)

[AwesomeYears]

Put some dynamics in the bottom stave, probs "mp".
Also in the Soave verse, change the key signature to F major.
Other than that, seems fine!

[Bespinben]

I want this dead streak to end, so I'm starting here.

[MUSX] [MUS] [MIDI] [PDF]

Hopefully you'll notice this post. When you do, these are the changes I made:

*Accidentals! You got to be consistent. You can't be spelling a "Gb --> tonic" progression one way, and then spelling it as "F# --> tonic" the next. Grant does this all the time in his music (not just in Yooka Laylee), so it's not anything new really. I opted for the Gb chord root spelling so that way it eliminates those nasty E#'s you get sometimes with the spelling, and also to show the chromatic motion from the 5th of Gb (i.e. Db) to the root of the tonic (C).
*M. 13 ~ There's some note overlap between the LH and RH. I put in parentheses to mark the shared notes, but I would suggest that you take some time to rethink the inversion of those LH chords so they don't overlap at all.
*Formatting! I mean more than just the NSM guidelines. I mean measure distribution, system spacing, page size, etc. - the works! The main issue really was that your original file had a lot of squished measures, making the notes hard to read. ALSO, you'll notice I split the LH of m. 28-43 into TWO staves. This is the most efficient way of notating this, as opposed to constantly changing clefs.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Bespinben.

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