[NDS] Professor Layton and the Curious Village - "Down the Tubes" by Bloop

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Submission Information:
Series: Professor Layton
Game: Professor Layton and the Curious Village
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Down the Tubes
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Bloop

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[Bloop]

inb4 monthly reminder

[Bloop]

monthly reminder

[Bloop]

so yeah

[Sebastian]

Excellent work!
A few things
Measure 17: You have articulation clashing with stuff
- Everywhere you have 2 sixteenth triplets in a row, I would change it to sextuplets like this:

It'd make it cleaner. I try to use them everywhere I can.
That is the only stuff I see. Excellent work!

[Bloop]

Changed the sextuplets, and fixed the articulation! I also removed the second voice playing in m. 17-24, as it's just a burden to play and too distracting for the main melody imo. Also did a few enharmonic fixes

[Tobbeh99]

At the very bottom of the second page there's a "6". To remove that one, create a pdf file by printing the pdf file instead of exporting, I've encountered the same problem. If that, for some reason, doesn't solve it, use this website to create a new pdf and white out the "6".

Dynamic ideas: measures 4-5 maybe put a "p/mp" since those are only accompaniment notes, but a "mf" measure 5 when the melody starts. Later measure 13-16, I think it would be befitting to have it in piano/mezzopiano "p/mp".

[Bloop]

but the exporting pdf has never failed me that much before
will fix that asap

EDIT: Done!

[Bloop]

yeah

[Sebastian]

Guys are you gonna look over this song already? XD

[Bloop]

APRIL

[Sebastian]

Odd.....I wonder why yours are always left in the dust.....

[Maelstrom]

Odd.....I wonder why yours are always left in the dust.....

Because they're so good, no one can find anything wrong with them.
I call it JDMEK5 syndrome

[Bloop]

The problems of being an awesome musician[/ego]

[Sebastian]

I agree