[NES] Mother - "Fallin' Love" by Gentlemancreeper

Started by Zeta, April 25, 2015, 03:36:56 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: EarthBound
Game: Mother
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Fallin' Love
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Gentlemancreeper

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DonValentino

#1
Not bad at all! For some reason, I cannot recall how the original is... oh well. Here's some initial feedback anyway:

1- From measures 1-4, move the bass to the left hand, and from measure 5 onwards, clean a little bit everything (swapping layer two with layer 1 and viceversa would fix the stem directions: right click on the measure, "Move/Copy layers...").

2- It'd be better if you created the tempo marking with the expression tool, and place it a little more to the left. Also, you could include a personal text like "Affettuoso", "Dolce" or whatever you feel like it.

3- Add articulations as you see convenient, like slurs, and also a pedal marking.

4- The copyright. It should be centered and like this:

Nintendo, Ape © 1989
http://www.ninsheetmusic.org

(yeah, capital letters for a url...)

5- In the last measure, the rest order should be inverted: first the quarter rest, then the half rest; instead of half rest and quarter rest.

Sounds good! Gj

Tobbeh99

-Songs goes in 2/2?

- fix the stem direction, as DonValentino said in point 1.

- Size: 10 on copyright and URL
Quote from: Dudeman on August 16, 2016, 06:11:42 AM
tfw you get schooled in English grammar by a guy whose first language is not English

10/10 tobbeh

Bespinben

#3
I edited the files with some cosmetic touch-ups. Fixed a few wrong/missing notes and added a proper pedal marking too.

[MUS] [MIDI] [PDF]

If someone gets the joke with the tempo marking I'm going to be so happy
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Zeta

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