[Wii] Super Mario Galaxy - "Family" (Replacement) by Latios212

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Galaxy
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Family
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Edit (existing arranger remains)

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[Latios212]

Tried playing the old sheet a couple of years ago, got frustrated because of occasional wrong notes. Not the worst sheet on site, but this new version is much better.

I'm not the best at hearing chords to thanks to TheMarioPianist for helping me on that

[Sebastian]

Ooooo I love this song! I'm in bed now but I'll take a look at it first thing tomorrow

[mikey]

I think it's really cool to see arrangers working together so closely on pieces

[Sebastian]

I think it's really cool to see arrangers working together so closely on pieces

Ikr?? I love this new submission system

Here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/jb7e6rrwrad6gl7/FamilyMLF.mus?dl=0

I did a little fixing. What I did:
- I took the Db out of Measure in the left hand cause I didn't hear it.
- In Measure 9, the 2nd layer wasn't necessary so I took it out. I also took a few notes out I didn't hear.
- In Measure 12, I added an F to the right hand chord like in the original.
- In Measure 13, there was a missing note. Added it.
- In Measure 14, the Db is a Bbb. Fixed it.
- In Measure 16, the chord has 1 too many notes. Fixed that.
- In Measure 18, the bottom note of the chord is Eb not F. Fixed that.
- In Measure 19, I put the D in the second layer as a Quarter note.
- Measure 23: 1 too many notes in the chord. Fixed it.
- Measure 27: Same as 19
- Measure 28: Missing a few notes. Fixed it.
- Measure 29-37: There were a few wrong notes. Fixed them.
- Lastly, I just Deku-ified it a little

Excellent Work, Latios!

[Latios212]

- Lastly, I just Deku-ified it a little [emoji14]

Lol what does that mean?

Anyway I won't be on my computer for another 10-ish hours so I can't look over these changes yet. But thanks! If anyone else wants to check it over, that'd be great!

~and yes, isn't it great that NSM is just like one big family helping each other out xD

[TheMarioPianist]

Ikr?? I love this new submission system

Here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/jb7e6rrwrad6gl7/FamilyMLF.mus?dl=0

I did a little fixing. What I did:
- I took the Db out of Measure in the left hand cause I didn't hear it.
- In Measure 9, the 2nd layer wasn't necessary so I took it out. I also took a few notes out I didn't hear.
- In Measure 12, I added an F to the right hand chord like in the original.
- In Measure 13, there was a missing note. Added it.
- In Measure 14, the Db is a Bbb. Fixed it.
- In Measure 16, the chord has 1 too many notes. Fixed that.
- In Measure 18, the bottom note of the chord is Eb not F. Fixed that.
- In Measure 19, I put the D in the second layer as a Quarter note.
- Measure 23: 1 too many notes in the chord. Fixed it.
- Measure 27: Same as 19
- Measure 28: Missing a few notes. Fixed it.
- Measure 29-37: There were a few wrong notes. Fixed them.
- Lastly, I just Deku-ified it a little

Excellent Work, Latios!

Yea, I don't know how to explain the word "Deku-ify," but I can tell MLF definitely did it!
Anyway, on to the rest of the fixes. Not much to say here; he just about nailed everything. When I did those chords, I think my head somehow made up some notes. I'm not hearing the extra notes I put in anymore. (Probably because they weren't there.) I'd say keep all of the changes. Thanks MLF!

[Olimar12345]

Adding to MLF's file, these were the additional changes I made:

[MUS] [PDF]

Formatting
-center-aligned the 2nd page title.
-added the missing quotation mark to the 2nd page title.
-left-aligned the page number (it was right aligned for some reason).
-condensed the composer names to two lines
-redistributed the spacing on page one. (equaled-out the squished header and the open valley of white space at the bottom)

Musical Errors
-Bbb's in measures 4, 13, 20, and 29 should be A naturals. The other places they exist are fine.
-F in measure 31 LH should be a Gb.
-added a diminuendo at 31, since all the ones there are invisible.
-rolled the chord at mm. 35 (RH)
-hid the rests in mm.13
-changed the Db to an Ab in measure 19 RH beat two (and again at 27)
-rolled the chord at mm.26
-removed a supplementary voice at 28 RH

[TheMarioPianist]

Man, I didn't think this sheet could get any better, but it just did! I guess that's why we have updaters. Duh.

[Latios212]

Man, I didn't think this sheet could get any better, but it just did! I guess that's why we have updaters. Duh.

I never fail to be pleasantly surprised xD

Olimar, feel free to update the files and finish this off. Won't be on computer for quite a while. Thanks so much!

[Olimar12345]

Files in the OP updated, as per request.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Olimar12345.

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