[Wii] Super Mario Galaxy 2 - "World 3" (Replacement) by mariolegofan

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Galaxy 2
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: World 3
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Sebastian]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7TbJBYssGOw


Also, the real name is, "World Map 3."

[Latios212]

Also, the real name is, "World Map 3."

Source? And does that mean we'll have to change the titles for the other maps too?

[Sebastian]

http://downloads.khinsider.com/game-soundtracks/album/super-mario-galaxy-2
It says World 3 Map but World Map 3 sounds much better imo.

And does that mean we'll have to change the titles for the other maps too?

Doubt it.....idk

[Sebastian]

Got that fixed, Latios. I actually found out on Mario Wikipedia that the official name is "World 3".
I updated the OP files.
Anything else?

[holland_oates89]

Hey this is great! Kudos on the cautionary accidentals and dynamics usage too!

This is a matter of personal preference, but I think 3.5 EVPUs is a little too thick for modern music. Granted, I also think that Finale's default thin line value of 1.035096730459270495874230592384 or whatever it is is too thin as well. Personally, I like to stick around 3 EVPUs. This translates to about 0.75pt, which is about how thick some etched engraver plates from publishers in the 1940's were, so it's pretty accurate as well. Keep in mind that if you change one line thickness, you need to change them all, so make sure that staff lines, barlines, stems, enclosure lines, crescendo lines and word extensions are all treated appropriately. Sometimes barlines can be a little thicker (I think I generally do use about 3.5 EVPUs there), but overall consistency is the name of the game.

To that end, you'll also want to make sure that your slur and tie tips are at this same minimum thickness of 3 EVPUs. This is another step to help ensure the 'illusion' that your score was actually engraved with metal plates - they weren't able to taper off to 0 in the way Finale's default slurs do.

The cross staff notation in measure 10 looks really clean but it is difficult for players to know which hands to use. I'd recommend splitting the portion of the arpeggio into layer two once it gets up to the right hand. The cross-staff beam can be left in layer 1 since it's tied to layer 1 of the left hand, but the beam needs to be in the center of both staves, not under the notes with a REALLY long stave going to the right hand. You can accomplish this using the Special Tools Palette, with the Reverse Stem tool and the Beam Angle tool - use them in that order to flip the stem so that the bottom note has the stem on the correct side, then use the Beam Angle tool to move the stem into place!

Still, unlike my ex-wife this score looks good and is nice to listen to! Great job dude!

[holland_oates89]

ANNNNNNNNNNND I just looked at the score info and saw you might be using PrintMusic. If you are, ignore everything I wrote and don't change it at all.

[Sebastian]

Thanks for the feedback! I'll get this fixed when I get on my computer tomorrow.

[Sebastian]

Bump

[Sebastian]

Bump

[Olimar12345]

I'll get this fixed when I get on my computer tomorrow.

Doesn't look like you ever fixed these things, since the files haven't been updated :c

[Sebastian]

Whoops.....never uploaded them. Is that it for this song?

[Sebastian]

This is a matter of personal preference, but I think 3.5 EVPUs is a little too thick for modern music. Granted, I also think that Finale's default thin line value of 1.035096730459270495874230592384 or whatever it is is too thin as well. Personally, I like to stick around 3 EVPUs. This translates to about 0.75pt, which is about how thick some etched engraver plates from publishers in the 1940's were, so it's pretty accurate as well. Keep in mind that if you change one line thickness, you need to change them all, so make sure that staff lines, barlines, stems, enclosure lines, crescendo lines and word extensions are all treated appropriately. Sometimes barlines can be a little thicker (I think I generally do use about 3.5 EVPUs there), but overall consistency is the name of the game.

To that end, you'll also want to make sure that your slur and tie tips are at this same minimum thickness of 3 EVPUs. This is another step to help ensure the 'illusion' that your score was actually engraved with metal plates - they weren't able to taper off to 0 in the way Finale's default slurs do.

I think I'll keep it how it is if you don't mind

The cross staff notation in measure 10 looks really clean but it is difficult for players to know which hands to use. I'd recommend splitting the portion of the arpeggio into layer two once it gets up to the right hand. The cross-staff beam can be left in layer 1 since it's tied to layer 1 of the left hand, but the beam needs to be in the center of both staves, not under the notes with a REALLY long stave going to the right hand. You can accomplish this using the Special Tools Palette, with the Reverse Stem tool and the Beam Angle tool - use them in that order to flip the stem so that the bottom note has the stem on the correct side, then use the Beam Angle tool to move the stem into place!

Thanks! I should of seen this on my own lol.
Fixed!

Acceptance?

[Olimar12345]

-add a quarter note B in the LH in beat 6 of measure 4, like the one before it.
-fix the stem of the second of the two cross-staved eighth notes in measure ten. It should be to the left of the note head.

[Sebastian]

I'm doing it now!