[WiiU] Super Mario Maker - "Airship (Super Mario Bros.)" by WandringMinstrel

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Maker
Console: Wii U
Title: Airship (Super Mario Bros.)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WandringMinstrel

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[WandringMinstrel]

[Bespinben]

In every place you have written a single note in the RH without harmony, there is indeed a harmony (ex: m. 3-6, & 9-12). When the harmony note is unison with the melody, it should be double-stemmed for the sake of voice preservation.

[WandringMinstrel]

I know there are the same number of voices there, I excluded it because it was the same note as in the bass; for the sake of the performer, it seemed unnecessary. In other words, the harmony in those spots is not the same note as the melody, but a C in unison with the bass voice. Cross-beaming in this instance is unsightly, and while I could include it in the upper staff (in parentheses), again, it seemed unnecessary. But if you would like me to include the lower C harmony in parentheses in the upper staff for voice conservation, I can do that.

[WandringMinstrel]

On second thought, that might suggest to some players to use an inconvenient fingering. I'll try some things out, let me know your thoughts.

[Bespinben]

On second thought, that might suggest to some players to use an inconvenient fingering. I'll try some things out, let me know your thoughts.

Le bump?

[WandringMinstrel]

Played around with it, but keeping all three voices gets messy quick.


I still think my original version is the cleanest, and I don't feel showing all three voices all of the time is really necessary in this instance. As always, feedback is welcome.

[Bespinben]

Those screenshots are in a locked folder, so I can't view them.

That said, if you think you're first draft is good, I'm fine with that. It meets the requirements.

[WandringMinstrel]

I think I fixed it. At any rate, I do think that what I submitted is the best looking version, but I'm still open to suggestions in case I missed something.

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