[WiiU] Splatoon - "Splattack!" by Olimar12345 & BrainyLucario

[Olimar12345]

-mm. 29-32 is still not in the correct key. Everything is a major third too low.
-rhythm grouping error still in measure 42
-combine the second eighth note and following quarter note in measure 44 into a dotted quarter note.

[BrainyLucario]

Fixed... moved them a major third up. corrected flats, fixed rhythm grouping error, combined note!

Files are now updated!

[BrainyLucario]

*Bump

[Olimar12345]

Mm 29-32 still has wrong notes. I'm not at my pc, but the Eb in 30 should def. be a D. Literally that entire section should just be the same as the four bars that came before it, with everything a half step higher (and the LH accompaniment varying a tad).

[BrainyLucario]

So like this?


https://www.dropbox.com/s/3i5lefe33y4gktg/Splattack%21.mus?dl=0

[Altissimo]

olimar's literally saying "copy the contents of m. 25-28 into 29-32 and raise everything a half step no more no less", so I don't really know where you're getting this from? here, the melody should literally be as follows:

(29) Bb Db Eb Bb Ab (30) Ab D (31) same as 29 (32) Ab F

the bass should be (idk about the chords but the lowest line in the left hand, and anytime it plays octaves, should be):
(29) Bb Db Eb Bb Bb Bb Ab (30) Ab Ab Ab D D D D (31) same as 29 (32) Ab Ab Ab F F G G (i'm not quite sure about those last three notes though)

like i said double check the chords and the last three notes of the bass

but see this is all exactly 1 half step above the contents of m. 25-28

[BrainyLucario]

ahhh, I see now. I'll make the changes right away. I  have to post something on the Official Undertale Project before i do this, though.

[BrainyLucario]

Updated! I edited the chords and kept the last 3 notes, for the ones you gave me seemed right...

[Olimar12345]

-Put a courtesy natural sign on the D natural in the RH in measure 30.
-the chord in the LH in measure 30, up-beat of 2 should be (low to high) D - A - D all notes having visible natural signs.
-the last three eighth notes in measure 30 (LH) should be D naturals.
-the second to last eighth note in measure 32 (LH) should be an F like the note that precedes it.

[Olimar12345]

On second thought, this arrangement is just dragging on with error after error and blemish after blemish, so in an effort to end this, here is the corrected file.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/59554832/nsm/NSM%20subs/Splattack%2112345.mus

In the future I urge you to get more feedback in the Personal Arrangements board before bringing arrangements here.

[Tobbeh99]

This is how I meant the glissando to look, if you want it in your arrangement.

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You could also write measures 1-4 in G-clef if you want the glissando. Also you could change the starting note of the glissando (how high you want it) it doesn't have to be a G.

[BrainyLucario]

Will update in a few..before i do, i feel like i should add your name to the "Arranged By" area, Olimar...since you helped finalize it. Is this okay with you?

[Olimar12345]

Eh, sure that's fine (If you want to, that is).

[BrainyLucario]

Aaanndd...Updated!

Wait...doesn't that mean someone else has to accept it?

[Olimar12345]

No?