I finished Vs. Meta Knight
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I'm not very sure about the notes and/or rhythms in measures 1-3, 21-22, 32-33, and 37-38, or the key signature in general. On another note, I'll take Halberd
Nice! Some spelling error I noticed: 90% of the time where you have used a C# and a F#, there should be a Db or Gb instead. For example measure 13, the chords are quartal chords, and should be spelled as 4ths. Also keep in mind the scale, phrygian/locrian, with C-Db-Eb-F-(Gb)-G-Ab-Bb, with that said I makes more sense to use Db and Gb.
The only times where you should keep the sharps you used are the measures: the chromatic run m. 29 (use sharps and naturals here if possible, and keep the quartal voicing), the solo m.33-35 (I think F# is better here).
Also measure 33 needs a bit fixing, the tie from Bb goes to A. I think it's better to show the triplet with a bracket, I assume it's the two 8ths and the two 16ths that are in the triplet.
And measure 32 should have a sextuplet rather than 2 triplets.
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