Hey, this arrangement is pretty solid!
I'll try and get some feedback on it later when I get back from class.
lol.....later turned into forever. Sorry xD
Anyway, here is some feedback.
I went ahead and made the changes for you to save you some time and wrote out an explanation of each mistake to help you learn for next time.
[MUS][PDF][MIDI]What I did
(I recommend thoroughly reading through this for future reference):
- The copyright info is not italicized, but rather just regular print. Also, a slash is required at the end of org. like this:
http://NinSheetMusic.org/- The correct BPM for this song is QN (Quarter Note) = 156. For the future, I would recommend using this tool to help you find the correct tempo.
http://www.all8.com/tools/bpm.htm- It would be much cleaner looking and less cramped if you have 5 measures per system.
- There were quite a few wrong notes that I managed to fix up, especially in the left hand. If you have trouble hearing lower notes or any notes in general, I would recommend a tool that slows down the song. This helps immensely when listening for the correct notes. Here is an easy-to-use online tool that I would recommend. It is very easy and helpful to use, not just for note hearing and slowing down songs, but also for easy, quick playback, and pause options:
https://www.tunetranscriber.com/- I fixed M. 7 & 15 to yield more to the original.
- In M. 17, where you have the note about putting the left hand down an octave, you can just use an 8va sign;
however, in this instance, you can just put the notes an octave lower. They are not low enough that they need an 8va sign.
- I went ahead and put in two extra key signatures to help out the performer. Not changing keys (in my opinion) would be confusing and the accidental spellings you did have in M. 17+ were very confusing.
- The left hand from M. 17-end is also somewhat wrong. I went ahead and updated that.
Other than that, great work! I hope to see more!
If there is anything you don't agree with, have a question about, or don't understand that I wrote above, please tell me : )