[PS2] Shadow of the Colossus - "A Closed-off City" by Ryan McGaughey

[Latios212]

Don't forget this!

-After listening incredibly closely, I belive that the LH octave harmony in m5 does not exist. Deleting it would also mean making the dotted half note in m4 a whole note to take up the rest of the space in that measure.

And one final suggestion: A pp marking in the middle of measure 4 would make it clearer that the following phrase should be played quieter (as it is in the original). Right now it looks like it's getting louder than mp.

[Maelstrom]

-Thanks for taking the time to listen closely to m.5. I was never 100% sure if I had the right notes there. I also removed the left hand part here. I know that technically the left hand part was not really in the recording but I felt that by adding that lower octave it more closely matched the timbre of that instrument playing the arpeggio. The right hand alone sounds a little thin to me but I guess it works...

I'd disagree a little. Having the same voice makes it sound much stronger than it is in the OST, where it's pretty light.

[iLikePiano]

Deleting it would also mean making the dotted half note in m4 a whole note to take up the rest of the space in that measure.

Oh I did do this but something went wrong I guess. The files updated correctly this time.

A pp marking in the middle of measure 4 would make it clearer that the following phrase should be played quieter (as it is in the original). Right now it looks like it's getting louder than mp.

Ok take a look at what I changed. Maybe it's being a little too clear now (too many dynamic markings)?

[Maelstrom]

Looks great!

[Zeta]

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