[MUL] Shantae and the Pirate's Curse - "You Found an Item!" by BrainyLucario

Started by Zeta, June 14, 2016, 08:16:53 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Shantae and the Pirate's Curse
Console: Multiplatform
Title: You Found an Item!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario

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BrainyLucario


Sebastian helped me a lot with this song, so it shouldn't have very many errors. It really wouldn't have many errors to begin with, honestly. It's only 1 measure.
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Maelstrom

This looks good.
One small thing:
Those chords are unplayable.
You have two main options. If you find something that you like better, feel free to use it, as long as it's not another augmented 10th. (chord examples will be from m1)
Option 1: Power chord. Simple Ab-Eb-Ab
Option 2: Major chord with octave. Also simple: Ab-C-Eb-Ab
Either way works.
It'll be done after this.

Optional: Add staccatos to the last notes (beat 7-the dotted quarters)

Sebastian

Quote from: Maelstrom on June 16, 2016, 11:55:00 AMThis looks good.
One small thing:
Those chords are unplayable.
You have two main options. If you find something that you like better, feel free to use it, as long as it's not another augmented 10th. (chord examples will be from m1)
Option 1: Power chord. Simple Ab-Eb-Ab
Option 2: Major chord with octave. Also simple: Ab-C-Eb-Ab
Either way works.
It'll be done after this.

Optional: Add staccatos to the last notes (beat 7-the dotted quarters)
I recommended the tenths to give it that full sound and he was cool with it. The tenths are in the original as well. Also, they're playable for some people, including me.

May I recommend a third option: Putting rolls on the 10ths. This will make is playable for most, if not all people.



Maelstrom

I can play 10ths too. But augmented ones are where we normally draw the line.
Quote from: Sebastian on June 16, 2016, 11:58:49 AMMay I recommend a third option: Putting rolls on the 10ths. This will make is playable for most, if not all people.
At that speed?
Nope.

Sebastian

Quote from: Maelstrom on June 16, 2016, 12:03:44 PMI can play 10ths too. But augmented ones are where we normally draw the line.
Oh really? That's fine then.

Quote from: Maelstrom on June 16, 2016, 12:03:44 PMAt that speed?
Nope.
I could play them at that speed ;)

Here is a song with a lot of 10ths throughout, but no augmented ones.
http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/2755



FireArrow

Quote from: Maelstrom on June 16, 2016, 11:55:00 AMThis looks good.
One small thing:
Those chords are unplayable.
You have two main options. If you find something that you like better, feel free to use it, as long as it's not another augmented 10th. (chord examples will be from m1)
Option 1: Power chord. Simple Ab-Eb-Ab
Option 2: Major chord with octave. Also simple: Ab-C-Eb-Ab
Either way works.
It'll be done after this.

Optional: Add staccatos to the last notes (beat 7-the dotted quarters)

Go with option 2 - the original has all the tones of the major chord and you wouldn't want to remove them from the arrangment.
Quote from: Dudeman on January 23, 2017, 05:35:59 PM
straight from the department of redundancy department

BrainyLucario

When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

BrainyLucario

Fixed. Musx is still wrong since I don't have the Full Version of Finale.
When given the choice between adulting and music, choose music every time.

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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