[NDS] Magical Starsign - "Pirate Battle" by LifeMushroom

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Magical Starsign
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Pirate Battle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LifeMushroom

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[LifeMushroom]

[cashwarrior1]

Make sure you follow sheet format guidelines (I feel weird saying this because I don't either ). Also, the first triplet rhythm in measure 13 (and the other ones that go the same way) should be dotted-eight sixteen, it's not a triplet.

[LifeMushroom]

Make sure you follow sheet format guidelines (I feel weird saying this because I don't either ). Also, the first triplet rhythm in measure 13 (and the other ones that go the same way) should be dotted-eight sixteen, it's not a triplet.

I thought I did follow the format.

[Sebastian]

Some formatting stuff (didn't check the notes):
- Something is up with the red text. Go ahead and make the composer into two lines, then you can have the arranger and composer in one text space. Same with the titles.
- The BPM/metronome marking should be an expression text, not a text tool text.
- You need a dynamic marking.
- Copyright should be, "Nintendo, Brownie Brown."

I'll check the notes later when I get home

EDIT: I just now realized that you use Finale Notepad. Would you like me to do the edits for you?

[LifeMushroom]

Yes, please.
Edited the triplet.

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

Also, get 4 measures per system. The whole sheet will make way more sense when you do so.

[LifeMushroom]

I would appreciate if someone took a look at this, as I have to be out of country for a month next week.

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

I'll help clean this up.
First, I fixed your formatting. Spacing stuff aside, make sure the your musical direction (the allegro moderato) is always bolded. Good on you for using one, though!
I made the sheet 4 bars per system universally, and spaced out the systems a little bit to fill up the page more.
I also put the LH up one octave with an "8lb" sign below; this makes it easier to read and comprehend without having to deal with all those ledger lines.
I also fixed the cramped last couple measures; just a quick reentering was all that it needed.
I haven't actually checked for note accuracy, just FYI. This is just a visual clean up.
Here's the updated file: MUS

[LifeMushroom]

Thanks. Updated

[Bespinben]

Pro Tip:
If you got an A and an Ab in the same chord, it probably means the Ab is a G# (ex: m. 13-16).

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