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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #300 on: September 17, 2019, 02:44:43 AM »

Battle Castle - Sebastian
  • The style description should go before the tempo marking.
  • The page numbers aren't positioned correctly; they should be lined up horizontally.
  • m41 LH: This note should be tied to m42
  • m64-65 RH: Since nothing is in the first layer, you should flip some of the 2nd layer notes.
  • Change http to https.
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Changelog, in addition to the above fixes:
- m. 12 missing melody on beat 4.5.
- Adjusted a couple of slurs and ties.

Everything else looks good. Approving this one.
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #301 on: September 17, 2019, 03:32:15 AM »

I added courtesy accidentals for Zeila's #115, and Battle Castle looks good too.

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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #302 on: September 22, 2019, 10:21:50 AM »

Oreburgh Gate - Onionleaf
This is an interesting piece...
  • The 6/4 bar at the beginning should be only around 4 beats long. Yep, the note is 4 beats long, with the other 2 beats being in the very last measure of the piece. I hope that's appropriate?
  • m17 LH: There is a pickup to m18 in the melody line here on beat 3 (E naturals); also, the Dxs in this measure should be E naturals.
  • m26-33: The G naturals should all be Fxs. In m33 LH, the D natural in the melody should be a Cx, and like in m17, there is an E natural quarter note on beat 3.
  • m45, 49 RH: Some of the accidentals in these measures are bit too close to notes and other markings.

Hi Static, sorry for the delay, I've made all the changes with just one query added in blue above.

I can have another look at this sheet sometime next week if that will help? It's been a while since I've edited it, so may be worth for me to do an extra self-review.

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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #303 on: September 23, 2019, 12:02:33 AM »

Wi-Fi Plaza - Sebastian
  • m9 beat 3: The RH and LH notes should be aligned vertically.
  • m14 RH: Slur on the grace note should be flipped.
  • m23 RH: I would make the Db a C# in this instance because it acts as a chromatic approach to the D natural.
  • m25 LH: The slur on beat 3.5 seems a bit too close to the note.
  • m35 LH: The Db should be a C# (F7#5 or F augmented 7th chord).
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(this is for Pt9 - Wi-Fi Plaza: Parade)
Fixed the above (although not sure what's wrong with 25 in particular?)

In addition to the above:
- Adjusted spacing
- Cut out some difficult to reach notes in the intro
- Respelled Fb as En in m. 3
- D#>Eb in m. 6
- Last RH note in m. 10 is Eb
- m. 13 melody is all quarters
- Layer 2 melody in 15 should have Db instead of C
- Beat 4 of m. 18 is C (and also following measure should have a C grace note)
- End of m. 23 should have a D. Also adjusted the slurs/ties here

Adjusted everything above, so looks good now!
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #304 on: November 03, 2019, 12:41:03 AM »

Hey all,

This project has been around for over 3 years and given the lack of traction it's had in the past couple, it doesn't seem to make much sense to keep this around any longer. Some of the sheets still need significant work but haven't been receiving the attention they need.

We're proposing updating sometime before Christmas with whatever we finish by then. If sheets linger past then, they would still be fine to submit via the normal process. Having this project away and done can help us more easily focus on whatever else we have coming up in the new year.

Any questions, feel free to ask.
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #305 on: November 10, 2019, 12:25:21 PM »

Hello,

To begin, congratulations for your works. It's impressive !
I'm new one this website even if I know ninsheetmusic since many years.
I started arrangement since two years.
If I understand, there is "Pokémon Route 205 (Night)" (two hands) which isn't taken.
I can do it. Can you confirm me if this music is always free ?
(I post my works on my channel youtube. I can send you the sheet music here.)

Thanks you.
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #306 on: November 12, 2019, 03:24:09 AM »

Hi Christophe, welcome and thanks for joining! :D

We're actually trying to shut this project down, so please submit any new sheets you have (including that one) through the normal submission process here. Feel free to ask any questions here if you need help!
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #307 on: November 13, 2019, 01:16:17 AM »

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  • Some 8th rests are clashing in m5 and 7, but other than that this looks good.
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Updated the rest positions in a bunch of places, accepting this one now.

Zeila - Stark Mountain
This is overall very very good! Just a couple of small things.
- This was composed by Go Ichinose, not Hitomi Sato. (The bass and percussive rhythm are indicative of that :P)
- For the chromatic triplet descent in m. 28-29 I think it'd be good to respell a few of the accidentals as follows:
  - m. 28 Ab (7th note) as G#
  - m. 29 F# as Gb
  - m. 29 Eb as D#
This way you keep the pairwise minor seconds. Actually, given that they're pairwise minor seconds I think these would be better written as sextuplets so you don't group them contrary to that.
- Oh, and I think you should put an "Edited by Zeila" on this one.
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #308 on: November 16, 2019, 05:22:03 PM »

Hi Christophe, welcome and thanks for joining! :D

We're actually trying to shut this project down, so please submit any new sheets you have (including that one) through the normal submission process here. Feel free to ask any questions here if you need help!

Ok. I will try to understand your system.
I have almost finish the sheet music for "Route 205 (night)". I will post very soon.
I have also a theme which is called "Encounter Collector" (it's not the real name) but he isn't perfect and I think you did a sheet music for this.
I don't think I will do a sheet music for 4 hands because it's not easy to hear all instruments.

Best regards,
Christophe.

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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #309 on: November 16, 2019, 11:35:52 PM »

Thanks! I updated Stark Mountain
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Re: The Official Pokémon Diamond, Pearl, and Platinum Project
« Reply #310 on: November 17, 2019, 07:25:05 PM »

Ok. I will try to understand your system.
I have almost finish the sheet music for "Route 205 (night)". I will post very soon.
I have also a theme which is called "Encounter Collector" (it's not the real name) but he isn't perfect and I think you did a sheet music for this.
I don't think I will do a sheet music for 4 hands because it's not easy to hear all instruments.

Best regards,
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Sure thing! Feel free to post whatever you've got in a topic in the Piano Arrangements board where we can give it an initial look.



Thanks! I updated Stark Mountain
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