[ARCADE] Marble Madness - "Intermediate Race" by joeberryosponge

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Marble Madness
Console: ARCADE
Title: Intermediate Race
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: joeberryosponge

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[joeberryosponge]

Song is at 1:39

[joeberryosponge]

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[joeberryosponge]

I added key signatures for clarity.

[Maelstrom]

Basically all this song needs now is good formatting.
Tips:
Resize everything to 90% and fit the systems closer together. You should easily get it down to 2 pgs.
Key sig changes need a double barline before them
m38 RH Don't beam the 2nd layer of eighths in pairs if you didn't do so up to this point
The first system on the 2nd page could really, really use some breathing room.
m11 LH - articulations are colliding with the beaming.
diminuendo in m22 is hitting the barline
Nudge the F in m18 a little bit to the left to avoid the barline further
There is no need for measure numbers on the added staff on pg 2. One per system is fine enough
The trill mark in m21 is colliding with the slur
Use some more staccatos. Esp on m4-9 in the RH and m28-end in the LH

[Maelstrom]

[joeberryosponge]

Basically all this song needs now is good formatting.
Tips:
Resize everything to 90% and fit the systems closer together. You should easily get it down to 2 pgs.
Key sig changes need a double barline before them
m38 RH Don't beam the 2nd layer of eighths in pairs if you didn't do so up to this point
The first system on the 2nd page could really, really use some breathing room.
m11 LH - articulations are colliding with the beaming.
diminuendo in m22 is hitting the barline
Nudge the F in m18 a little bit to the left to avoid the barline further
There is no need for measure numbers on the added staff on pg 2. One per system is fine enough
The trill mark in m21 is colliding with the slur
Use some more staccatos. Esp on m4-9 in the RH and m28-end in the LH

Added your suggestions. Thanks!

[Latios212]

Key sig changes need a double barline before them

Don't forget that!

Additionally the last few measure 35-38 have some odd intertwining between the two RH voices, and your way makes it easy to read, although it's difficult to tell what voice goes where. If you're doing it this way, though, break the beam between beats 3 and 4 in measure 37 because those pairs of eighth notes belong to different voices.

[joeberryosponge]

Don't forget that!

Additionally the last few measure 35-38 have some odd intertwining between the two RH voices, and your way makes it easy to read, although it's difficult to tell what voice goes where. If you're doing it this way, though, break the beam between beats 3 and 4 in measure 37 because those pairs of eighth notes belong to different voices.

Changed the eighth notes in the last measures.

Can someone put the double barline in the mus file? I only have Finale 2014 and exporting to mus deletes the double barline for some reason.

[Latios212]

I said 37, not 38 (the bottom layer in beats 3-4).

Can get the files updated for you if you want.

[JDMEK5]

Latios and I made some (possibly final) edits. Here's our finished product. If you're good with this, then we're good to go.

The changes we made:
- Key in measure 19 and on changed to C minor; enharmonic spellings modified appropriately.
- Double barlines for key changes.
- Added courtesy accidentals in various places on the second page.
- Did a bit of custom beam work (breaking and unbreaking beams) in the RH of the last two measures.
- Got rid of second layer in LH of measure 14.

I think that's everything.

[joeberryosponge]

I'm good with this. Thanks for your work!

[Latios212]

Fantastic!

(Small thing, made the composer info two lines because it's long.)

Accepted.

[Zeta]

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