[GBA] Hamtaro: Ham-Ham Heartbreak - "Monkey Salsa" by Altissimo

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Ham-Ham Heartbreak
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Monkey Salsa
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo

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[Altissimo]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o_bLClFavQk

[Sebastian]

Nice work!
- Suggestion: Have you considered putting this song in G# Minor (5 sharps)?
- M. 2 Beat 1.5 (RH): You're missing an Eb.
- M. 2 Beat 4.0 (RH): You're missing a G.
- You have a couple wrong notes in M. 5 & the first note of 6:

Correct notes

[close]

- The first note of M. 8 (RH) is a fourth.
- M. 4? Hmm...
- The BPM is QN = 180.

Again, great work on this song! Very catchy piece.

[Altissimo]

Nice work!
- Suggestion: Have you considered putting this song in G# Minor (5 sharps)?

it was. Olimar recommended Ab minor instead.

- M. 2 Beat 1.5 (RH): You're missing an Eb.

I'm actually not hearing this at all.

- M. 2 Beat 4.0 (RH): You're missing a G.[/quote]

fixed

- You have a couple wrong notes in M. 5 & the first note of 6:

Correct notes

[close]

I'm not hearing this either. I recognize that what I hear in the bass is the same as the opening measure but I don't believe the right hand is doing an imitation of the first measure, here. I really do not think your interpretation is correct.

- The first note of M. 8 (RH) is a fourth.

ok fixed

- M. 4? Hmm...

this is the least useful comment you could have possibly given

- The BPM is QN = 180.

ok fixed

updated OP

[Latios212]

About m. 2: It's there.

About m. 5-6: I'm hearing what's in his picture (except under the first two Ab's should be Cb's); how you want to interpret that is up to you.

Measure 6 beats 3-4 is beamed incorrectly.

[Altissimo]

ok i finally heard those mysterious A-flats but some other notes that I swear to god I am hearing do not line up with MLF's, this is what i hear: like i swear to christ that there is a Cb somewhere in beat 2, not a Db like it should be if it was just the opening section transposed again. i cannot emphasize enough the degree to which i hear this as being the case

[Latios212]

i swear to christ that there is a Cb somewhere in beat 2, not a Db

(except under the first two Ab's should be Cb's)

yes

[Altissimo]

oh whoops. so yes, basically, what i hear. ok. cool.

updated op and fixed the other two things as well

[Sebastian]

it was. Olimar recommended Ab minor instead.

Ah, ok. It's cool then.

I think Latios covered the rest. Thanks for the help, Lat!


EDIT: Don't forget to edit the left hand beaming of M. 6 as well.

[Altissimo]

fixed

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