[DELETED] [PC] Touhou 15: Legacy of the Lunatic Kingdom - "The Rabbit Has Landed" by MKXScorpion

Started by Zeta, September 14, 2016, 01:42:59 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Touhou 15: Legacy of the Lunatic Kingdom
Console: PC
Title: The Rabbit Has Landed
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: MKXScorpion

WaluigiTime64


Don't worry guys, I'm on it. Already noticed several things that should be fixed, so I'll get back to you when I can.
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WaluigiTime64

Ok I'm back. Here's the new MUS file.

Some improvements:
 - The beaming was the biggest issue by far. Look at the sheet and you can get an idea of how it works.
 - In doing the beaming fixes, the note values have also been altered, because very few people like seeing dots doing 2 different things to the same note.
 - On some occasions the LH had 16th notes where there could've been staccatos. All of those have been fixed.
 - The Bb minor section was actually Eb minor. It's strange, because you got the other sections correct, including the one which is almost identical.
 - Added some slurs to the LH to make it more obvious where it doesn't staccato.
 - Fixed a few accidentals.
 - Altered the measure distribution.
 - Fixed the formatting (text, font, quotation marks, etc.). Read these next time.
 - Fixed the file name, to include the game name.

Suggestions:
 - Add some slurs to the RH, to accentuate the staccatos.
 - Add some more dynamics.
 - Add some more articulations (such as accents).
 - Any reason why there's a random gap in the LH at Measure 50?
 - The LH from M.17-24 and M.49-56 seems a bit fast. Maybe simplify it a little (such as avoiding any repeated 16th notes)?

Other than that, the actual notes were all very accurate! Nice work on that part.
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Maelstrom

As much as I don't want this sheet do die, but it looks like this may, in fact, be plagiarism, unless, of course, it was you who created this arrangement:
As per the rules of this forum, and since you haven't posted once, I will just be archiving this for now. If, in fact, this is your own arrangement, please repost it and inform us.