[GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Credits" by Altissimo

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Credits
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo

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[Altissimo]

[Altissimo]

bump

[Maelstrom]

-Tempo text should be bold.
-RH parking on the first 2 systems of pg 2 placed awkwardly
-Assuming you simplified the 2nd layer in the RH for playability.
-How is one supposed to play the top layer and the bottom of the RH at one time? It's just not possible. This could be solved with 4 things, none of which are perfect:
1: Shortening the note length so it's not held so long.
2: Add pedal
3: Add Sostenuto ped. but that only works the way you would want if you were at a grand piano
4: Be creative?
Regardless, it needs to change in some way.
-Double barline needed for m17 for the key change

You may have noticed I didn't really talk about the notes at all.
That's because, while I may want to take a 2nd look later, they're pretty much perfect.

[Altissimo]

I did simplify the RH for playability. Decided to add a ped marking. Everything else is fixed.

[FireArrow]

Why are you asking the player to move their right hand down just to play octaves in 18-25?

[Olimar12345]

That almost looks like a copy and paste error from the measures with the whole notes.

[Altissimo]

Why are you asking the player to move their right hand down just to play octaves in 18-25?

It's not a copy-paste error. I thought it would be easier on the player that way. Maybe not I guess since they have to move their hand. Should I remove it?
(I do mean for the first eighth note to not be beamed to the others though)

[Olimar12345]

what exactly do you want played with the RH?

[Altissimo]

the top notes of the octave, so LH is playing the bottom part and RH is playing top part

[Olimar12345]

In that case, I would suggest rewriting it like this:



This way you can more easily see which layer is intended for which hand, since it isn't uncommon to see planing octaves in the LH.

[Altissimo]

fixed, how dat

[Altissimo]

bump

[Maelstrom]

So close....
I fixed the hypermeter on pg 1, cleaned up the rests in that repeating section, along with the staccato/whole note collision.
Fixed ped. markings.
Maybe some small formatting fix I'm forgetting.
Files:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/q955sppz2u4w1no/AABdBsXex15X7oTHYc2-6vMaa?dl=0

[Altissimo]

Updated. Thanks!